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Winter Disaster (Free verse) by Sasha
A bridge, whose falling guillotined
a ship that trusted it to hold,
now bobs in a mess of floated steel
already whitened by the cold.
The ship, cross-sectioned as a blueprint,
goes down in two. The river sighs
and shuts its two cold banks above,
locking its trophy in a case of ice.
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.0
Weighted score: 5.2384057
Overall Rank: 4125
Posted: October 18, 2004 6:06 PM PDT; Last modified: November 25, 2004 11:07 PM PST
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