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Winter Disaster (Free verse) by Sasha
A bridge, whose falling guillotined a ship that trusted it to hold, now bobs in a mess of floated steel already whitened by the cold. The ship, cross-sectioned as a blueprint, goes down in two. The river sighs and shuts its two cold banks above, locking its trophy in a case of ice.

Up the ladder: At Sunset
Down the ladder: driftwood

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.0
Weighted score: 5.2384057
Overall Rank: 4125
Posted: October 18, 2004 6:06 PM PDT; Last modified: November 25, 2004 11:07 PM PST
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[8] celticskatermatt1 @ 68.7.187.148 | 5-Dec-04/4:33 PM | Reply
this poem was a disater( jk ) very nice!
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