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Dark Matter (Free verse) by Musicman
I have not come to the solution of an illusion or any delusion to a solution to the problem of the cosmic question which to answer would create a chasm in the chaos of the universe. The problem with the problem is the solution before those who jump to conclusions not taking time becomes a problem with their own solutions to conclusions of their own. But before man may find a solution to this solution we must ask can the solution if there is no problem become a problem which to fix may cause another problem. So a solution may cause that which one does not want from the solution or the attempted dilution of the problem.

Up the ladder: This, my love is for you
Down the ladder: Up.

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.3333335
Weighted score: 4.9205313
Overall Rank: 9457
Posted: October 24, 2007 1:46 AM PDT; Last modified: October 24, 2007 1:46 AM PDT
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[8] Skamper @ 58.171.246.128 | 27-Oct-07/3:58 AM | Reply
I have a problem with the line breaks because I want this to fit a rhythm my tongue can get around without spitting all over my monitor. And with saying that I feel like I've justified the whole concept with which you write...or did I miss something?
[n/a] INTRANSIT @ 69.23.157.197 | 27-Oct-07/3:45 PM | Reply
Could you explain the term "movement" to me ? Using this piece as a for instance, if you like.
[n/a] Musicman @ 192.208.44.100 | 4-Nov-07/1:59 AM | Reply
OK, so let's try something a little different.
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