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Dark Matter (Free verse) by Musicman

I have not come to the solution of an illusion or any delusion to a solution to the problem of the cosmic question which to answer would create a chasm in the chaos of the universe. The problem with the problem is the solution before those who jump to conclusions not taking time becomes a problem with their own solutions to conclusions of their own. But before man may find a solution to this solution we must ask can the solution if there is no problem become a problem which to fix may cause another problem. So a solution may cause that which one does not want from the solution or the attempted dilution of the problem.

Skamper 27-Oct-07/3:58 AM
I have a problem with the line breaks because I want this to fit a rhythm my tongue can get around without spitting all over my monitor. And with saying that I feel like I've justified the whole concept with which you write...or did I miss something?




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