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Your Turn (revised) (Free verse) by Brandy_Cali530
Shut-Up Don't talk Just listen My turn to talk Your turn to listen Your turn to cry What? Why? Who am I? Who the hell are you? I won't, I can't just forget What were you thinking? Then again What was I thinking? How could you do this to me? I gave you too many chances. In return, You gave me too many excuses. I have cried too much. You have hurt me More then once I ignored the truth You broke your promises Time and time again Over and over All the same lies Same pathetic stories Your selfish decisions Your greedy ways I will never be cheated on again! How can you say you Love me? You don't know what Love is! It is over Over for Good We can not be together And, for me? No More Crying Days It's Your Turn

Up the ladder: Cornerstone
Down the ladder: Who's on First?

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.3333335
Weighted score: 4.9205313
Overall Rank: 9462
Posted: January 15, 2005 10:16 AM PST; Last modified: January 15, 2005 10:16 AM PST
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