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Bullfrog Night (Haiku) by Musicman Another lover
enticed in the humid air
bullfrog chants delight
Up the ladder:
Gotta Leave You Alone
Down the ladder:
Diane Keaton's Tits
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 7.25
Posted: October 24, 2007 6:18 AM PDT; Last modified: October 24, 2007 6:18 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.2682066 Overall Rank: 3925 Comments:
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Dovina @ 75.82.86.162
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24-Oct-07/11:40 AM
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I hate the 5-7-5 restriction some people place on haiku, which in this case requires an unnecessary "the" in line 2. Otherwise good.
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Musicman @ 192.208.44.100
> Dovina
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24-Oct-07/12:31 PM
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I agree.
Ha! I almost didn't like the word > chant. boo on me.
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