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Bullfrog Night (Haiku) by Musicman

Another lover enticed in the humid air bullfrog chants delight

Dovina 24-Oct-07/11:40 AM
I hate the 5-7-5 restriction some people place on haiku, which in this case requires an unnecessary "the" in line 2. Otherwise good.




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