poemranker ::20 most recent comments by INTRANSIT (201-220) and replies

Comments byINTRANSIT, 201–220 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

replying on Birmingham gardens by INTRANSIT 10 Jan 2006, 8:07 AM
Wierdsconsin. Kenosha to be spec. I used to do a great deal of east coast work but they've beefed up the force so I run the midwest area now. Less stress as a driver but the eastern seaboard is a poetry mecca.
on I, Ann Boleyn by http://mulberryfairy 10 Jan 2006, 8:02 AM
Poems like this make me so proud to be male. not
on Reckoning by <~> 10 Jan 2006, 7:52 AM
'Mornin. be over in a minute and I'm bringing something for one of the short story forums.
replying on Birmingham gardens by INTRANSIT 9 Jan 2006, 7:35 PM
Something like that. i'm home now, out tomorrow :(
on Reckoning by <~> 9 Jan 2006, 9:39 AM
Serious juju. Sorry, I'm still from the Rothian camp. Do you just like to play with little balls? I'll stop now. Gotta visit the loo. I'll check back with scrawl a little later. Brain is cooking today. Hope I can post my newest "over there". Thanks fo' da hep!
replying on Birmingham gardens by INTRANSIT 9 Jan 2006, 9:16 AM
Ok. I'm registered but inactive. I have my key. Where do I go to use it?
on What Matters by Dovina 9 Jan 2006, 8:49 AM
This reads like a sentence in a novel to me. I hate to hardcore you like that but, it's flat.
replying on Birmingham gardens by INTRANSIT 9 Jan 2006, 8:48 AM
"with one prick I could bleed you down or scrawl on a bathroom wall...". sure. I'll give it a go. Directions please.
replying on Birmingham gardens by INTRANSIT 9 Jan 2006, 8:39 AM
Re. #1 The better half or the not-better half?
replying on Birmingham gardens by INTRANSIT 9 Jan 2006, 8:37 AM
wow. that's a helluva tool! I was thinking about submitting it to Birmingham poetry review. no kidding. would that be redundant and too expectational?
replying on Birmingham gardens by INTRANSIT 9 Jan 2006, 8:27 AM
ow Ow OW! OW!
on Blackout, Amman, November, 2005 by zodiac 8 Jan 2006, 3:34 PM
Too many options to list. See dealer for details.
replying on Birmingham gardens by INTRANSIT 8 Jan 2006, 1:03 PM
'sokay pardno. I'm packing my bags to head out tomorrow. Gotta go pick up the truck from the repair shop when I get back tonight I'm going to raed all of yours that I haven't read yet. I'm trying to dress up some of my poems and get them ready to mail out for submission. (god I hate that word. lol) Any suggestions?
on greymo(u)rn by lmp 8 Jan 2006, 12:39 PM
"the whole effect was a draining of color from the landscape" You've already shown us this, why tell?

And then "safe and vulnerable" is all you need there as well.
on Pledge by http://mulberryfairy 8 Jan 2006, 9:03 AM
I don't wanna hear it.
on Birmingham gardens by INTRANSIT 8 Jan 2006, 8:58 AM
The -for now- and the -meanwhile- had to go.
on The Forgetting by Dovina 5 Jan 2006, 7:20 AM
Congrats on Divorcing Tennessee! Sorry I still don't know what to think of this one.
replying on Sunlighting by ALChemy 5 Jan 2006, 7:11 AM
I prefer the dawn spelling. traditionalist me. But a "Don" in a sarong could be the funniest thing ever invented!
on Sunlighting by ALChemy 4 Jan 2006, 8:11 PM
Fuck witty. Though it's all I have at the moment. I'll take quality (like yours) over witty any day of the week.

I think l-3 could lose the (the) and be A-OK. fackit. 10
replying on We'll be right back after these messages by INTRANSIT 4 Jan 2006, 3:15 PM
Well I'll be. I hve to change my spelling of balsa. I could swear I saw it spelled -asso once. Too long ago I guess.