Re: a comment on Birmingham gardens by INTRANSIT |
10-Jan-06/8:07 AM |
Wierdsconsin. Kenosha to be spec. I used to do a great deal of east coast work but they've beefed up the force so I run the midwest area now. Less stress as a driver but the eastern seaboard is a poetry mecca.
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Re: I, Ann Boleyn by http://mulberryfairy |
10-Jan-06/8:02 AM |
Poems like this make me so proud to be male. not
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Re: Reckoning by <~> |
10-Jan-06/7:52 AM |
'Mornin. be over in a minute and I'm bringing something for one of the short story forums.
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Re: a comment on Birmingham gardens by INTRANSIT |
9-Jan-06/7:35 PM |
Something like that. i'm home now, out tomorrow :(
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Re: Reckoning by <~> |
9-Jan-06/9:39 AM |
Serious juju. Sorry, I'm still from the Rothian camp. Do you just like to play with little balls? I'll stop now. Gotta visit the loo. I'll check back with scrawl a little later. Brain is cooking today. Hope I can post my newest "over there". Thanks fo' da hep!
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Re: a comment on Birmingham gardens by INTRANSIT |
9-Jan-06/9:16 AM |
Ok. I'm registered but inactive. I have my key. Where do I go to use it?
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Re: What Matters by Dovina |
9-Jan-06/8:49 AM |
This reads like a sentence in a novel to me. I hate to hardcore you like that but, it's flat.
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Re: a comment on Birmingham gardens by INTRANSIT |
9-Jan-06/8:48 AM |
"with one prick I could bleed you down or scrawl on a bathroom wall...". sure. I'll give it a go. Directions please.
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Re: a comment on Birmingham gardens by INTRANSIT |
9-Jan-06/8:39 AM |
Re. #1 The better half or the not-better half?
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Re: a comment on Birmingham gardens by INTRANSIT |
9-Jan-06/8:37 AM |
wow. that's a helluva tool! I was thinking about submitting it to Birmingham poetry review. no kidding. would that be redundant and too expectational?
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Re: a comment on Birmingham gardens by INTRANSIT |
9-Jan-06/8:27 AM |
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Re: Blackout, Amman, November, 2005 by zodiac |
8-Jan-06/3:34 PM |
Too many options to list. See dealer for details.
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Re: a comment on Birmingham gardens by INTRANSIT |
8-Jan-06/1:03 PM |
'sokay pardno. I'm packing my bags to head out tomorrow. Gotta go pick up the truck from the repair shop when I get back tonight I'm going to raed all of yours that I haven't read yet. I'm trying to dress up some of my poems and get them ready to mail out for submission. (god I hate that word. lol) Any suggestions?
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Re: greymo(u)rn by lmp |
8-Jan-06/12:39 PM |
"the whole effect was a draining of color from the landscape" You've already shown us this, why tell?
And then "safe and vulnerable" is all you need there as well.
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Re: Pledge by http://mulberryfairy |
8-Jan-06/9:03 AM |
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Re: Birmingham gardens by INTRANSIT |
8-Jan-06/8:58 AM |
The -for now- and the -meanwhile- had to go.
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Re: The Forgetting by Dovina |
5-Jan-06/7:20 AM |
Congrats on Divorcing Tennessee! Sorry I still don't know what to think of this one.
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Re: a comment on Sunlighting by ALChemy |
5-Jan-06/7:11 AM |
I prefer the dawn spelling. traditionalist me. But a "Don" in a sarong could be the funniest thing ever invented!
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Re: Sunlighting by ALChemy |
4-Jan-06/8:11 PM |
Fuck witty. Though it's all I have at the moment. I'll take quality (like yours) over witty any day of the week.
I think l-3 could lose the (the) and be A-OK. fackit. 10
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Re: a comment on We'll be right back after these messages by INTRANSIT |
4-Jan-06/3:15 PM |
Well I'll be. I hve to change my spelling of balsa. I could swear I saw it spelled -asso once. Too long ago I guess.
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