And you should go fly a plane. Basso, preferably.

Ha! Duh on me.

You want her skin to usurp the morning which has usurped the rind, correct? I can see it. 17 syllables is not enough some times.

You're seeing rockmage on the side, arent you?

I agree. "Now there's a fence" works but maybe a fresh brick wall
and the elbow of a backhoe jutting above.

Or a washing machine. All poems are better with one of those.

It's not for me. though it does cause me to have snickerous thoughts about -=Dark-Angel=-.

My dic. says that it also means: Dark;dim. I'm guessing She went with darkling for flow/beat reasons.

Well, what exactly is the illogic in Nephs poem. the word darkling? Perhaps it's the pale glow in s-2 that leads us awry? I personally see no problem here.

Though I think (well-known) are the key words here. I'm sure one exists though I may not be able to find it as I'm not near as well read as others. What used to not make sense to me in my Kerouac , now does. But.

Nothing's wrong
Something's right

W.C, fields bathrobe

Kerouac that makes no sense to me. Funny though.

Kerouac comes to mind.

We have many trees in my neighborhood that have dark bark on them and they are still very dark in full daylight. I like the way the tree starts slightly ominous and becomes "friendly" by the end. Villanelles are a mother to do. I've only tried twice. Thus far.

Um, no. While I'm sure we could all use a little more uhurU, I'm talking about a Star Trek thing. Obviously you don't understand. I think you're being hyper-logical about the poem. Oh well.

What are you? 100% Vulcan? If every poem were perfectly logical, would they be poems anymore? I think not. They would be Wapiti.
Either you've been spending too much time discussing certain things with a certain group or you need a heavy dose of Uhura.

"My name is Inigo Montoya. You keel my father. Prepare to die."

No one who has seen the princess bride should be touched. in any meaning of the word. that is my decree.

I disagree. Anyone who is anyone in the poemranker universe knows a queen always carries a good chainsaw. <~> has an Husqvarna. I've seen it. It's chrome!

Thanks C. you can't e-mail me anything at the moment. Cldtrky is non-operational and when I put it back up I'm sure it will be something else. People keep telling me I should get my feet wet but I keep asking myself "why?". That is to say I cannot come up with a valuable and logical reason to seek publication. Would you share your reasoning? I'm always open to opinion, even if I don't like it. Thanks again. Merry Bearings and Happy hydraulics to you.

stinker.

Cldtrucky? cute. Hey, have you submitted anything offline/ by mail anywhere? If so, what was the result. Thanks.