on some deleted poem
23 Oct 2002, 6:14 AM
Perfectly parked.
on Mystery on the Bridge by vulcan
23 Oct 2002, 6:19 AM
I like this but, you've got a bridge AND a fireplace.... I got a little lost somewhere.
on Flamin Monkey's by Blade
23 Oct 2002, 6:34 AM
Wierd. Some potential.
on moist towelettes by chinstrap
23 Oct 2002, 6:36 AM
Yeah buddy!
on Living Conditions by Christof
25 Oct 2002, 11:19 AM
After reading this I'd think you've done some over the road work too. Another beauty. That's why I chose you for my mentor. I'm using a slow truck stop computer in Knoxville right now. God I wish I was home.9
on some deleted poem
25 Oct 2002, 11:29 AM
And I thought I was sensitive to these things. Beautiful. Gotta get to D.C. now.
on Shadow's First Attempt at Haiku by loneshadow29
25 Oct 2002, 4:23 PM
You gotta let go of that negative energy sometime ,dude. Nice haiku though
on dream dream dream dream dream by nentwined
25 Oct 2002, 4:25 PM
Yess, and this is really good my friend.
on Mystery on the Bridge by vulcan
27 Oct 2002, 6:28 AM
I like the rework, I can see the picture better now. Might've been me the first time. Anyway, this is beautiful and sad.good read.8
on advice for the heated by <~>
29 Oct 2002, 2:26 AM
Yes,defrost. I like to watch;)
on In the Valley of Two-Dollar Pints of Red Hook IPA by <~>
29 Oct 2002, 2:30 AM
Dittos on the last three comments. Fun and true.
on The Black Hearted Sunflower by anitawit
29 Oct 2002, 2:38 AM
Not quite a haiku but excellent content.
on In the Quiet of the Night a Tree Gently Shakes by Nicholas Jones
30 Oct 2002, 5:44 AM
Now THAT'S a Haiku! I'd like to see more of these, please.
on Slept by Nicholas Jones
2 Nov 2002, 3:59 PM
Painfully true. You are quite the writer Mr. Jones. Another for me to look up to, thank you.
on Got Balls? by Yardbird
4 Nov 2002, 12:00 PM
I don't care if this has value or not. I laughed till my face stiffened. Value enough for me.
on Stranger by feathers68
4 Nov 2002, 12:15 PM
um, stanza 2 was repetetive of stanza 1 I thought. the word "pain" bugged me. Great theme I'd agree, and zzinnia's right too. It'll help deepen your work.
on some deleted poem
4 Nov 2002, 3:58 PM
It just so happens that in my mix and match poetry book I'm in the beginning of a section devoted to this type of thing. Quite good.
on OUR FUTURE? by kliq
5 Nov 2002, 3:16 PM
Then I guess you'd better go outside and play while you still can. I don't know about you, but I aint givin up my spirit. I like pickles anyway. For the effort...