regarding some deleted poem...	23-Oct-02/6:14 AM
Perfectly parked.
Re: Mystery on the Bridge by vulcan	23-Oct-02/6:19 AM
I like this but, you've got a bridge AND a fireplace.... I got a little lost somewhere.
Re: Flamin Monkey's by Blade	23-Oct-02/6:34 AM
Wierd. Some potential.
Re: moist towelettes by chinstrap	23-Oct-02/6:36 AM
Yeah buddy!
Re: Living Conditions by Christof	25-Oct-02/11:19 AM
After reading this I'd think you've done some over the road work too. Another beauty. That's why I chose you for my mentor. I'm using a slow truck stop computer in Knoxville right now. God I wish I was home.9
regarding some deleted poem...	25-Oct-02/11:29 AM
And I thought I was sensitive to these things. Beautiful. Gotta get to D.C. now.
Re: Shadow's First Attempt at Haiku by loneshadow29	25-Oct-02/4:23 PM
You gotta let go of that negative energy sometime ,dude. Nice haiku though
Re: dream dream dream dream dream by nentwined	25-Oct-02/4:25 PM
Yess, and this is really good my friend.
Re: Mystery on the Bridge by vulcan	27-Oct-02/6:28 AM
I like the rework, I can see the picture better now. Might've been me the first time. Anyway, this is beautiful and sad.good read.8
Re: advice for the heated by <~>	29-Oct-02/2:26 AM
Yes,defrost. I like to watch;)
Re: In the Valley of Two-Dollar Pints of Red Hook IPA by <~>	29-Oct-02/2:30 AM
Dittos on the last three comments. Fun and true.
Re: The Black Hearted Sunflower by anitawit	29-Oct-02/2:38 AM
Not quite a haiku but excellent content.
Re: Held by <~>	29-Oct-02/12:15 PM
Yes, Quite the teacher this one. Say,zzinnia? Could we revisit my "fire" piece? Theres an important lesson there and I'd kill myself if I missed it.(Not literally) Thanks. 9
Re: In the Quiet of the Night a Tree Gently Shakes by Nicholas Jones	30-Oct-02/5:44 AM
Now THAT'S a Haiku! I'd like to see more of these, please.
Re: Slept by Nicholas Jones	2-Nov-02/3:59 PM
Painfully true. You are quite the writer Mr. Jones. Another for me to look up to, thank you.
Re: arise by daniella	4-Nov-02/11:56 AM
Well assembled too, I might add. Nothing like a boost in the right direction, either.
Re: Got Balls? by Yardbird	4-Nov-02/12:00 PM
I don't care if this has value or not. I laughed till my face stiffened. Value enough for me.
Re: Stranger by feathers68	4-Nov-02/12:15 PM
um, stanza 2 was repetetive of stanza 1 I thought. the word "pain" bugged me. Great theme I'd agree, and zzinnia's right too. It'll help deepen your work.
regarding some deleted poem...	4-Nov-02/3:58 PM
It just so happens that in my mix and match poetry book I'm in the beginning of a section devoted to this type of thing. Quite good.
Re: OUR FUTURE? by kliq	5-Nov-02/3:16 PM
Then I guess you'd better go outside and play while you still can. I don't know about you, but I aint givin up my spirit. I like pickles anyway. For the effort...