| Re: You'll Never Hear by confuzdlilgirl |
5-Nov-02/3:25 PM |
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It's good to feel, but don't let it consume you. Walk with us, slowly, and you'll be fine. Both pieces are emotionally saturated. You have pattern and rythm though, something I struggle for. 5/5
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
6-Nov-02/5:22 AM |
He will wait into eternity for you.
"Vesuvian in my impetuousness" killer.
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| Re: everyone sucks. by kliq |
6-Nov-02/5:47 AM |
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I like the message. I think it could use some dressing up though.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
6-Nov-02/6:29 PM |
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You can't hide your faith from me. It shows in your writing.
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| Re: Some Things by Christof |
7-Nov-02/6:46 AM |
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Boy are the girls gonna love this! I see what you mean about compressing lines together. I think I can afford to do that. Oh how I wish I could relate to all that goes on here. I can read though, I suppose that gives me an advantage. Nice work, as usual. I forgot that libraries can be sensual.(Thanks N.J.) Gotta work on my piece about an old building I "loved" when I was younger. Interestins swap of characters here too. I'll round up.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
7-Nov-02/6:51 AM |
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The evil dictators list is longer than Santas' for Christs' sake! How are we gonna do that? Funny stuff.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
7-Nov-02/4:46 PM |
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Maybe I should "get busy". Might help my work. Nice a m quickie. Feels a little harsh though.
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| Re: Search of Love by loneshadow29 |
9-Nov-02/1:18 PM |
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| Re: Plastic People by cosmiccantinaguy |
9-Nov-02/1:37 PM |
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Well, there goes my theory about bums having the most freedom! HA! What was I thinking? 8 for your eye-poking the rich and "synthetic infection"
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| Re: candela by poetic-chaos |
9-Nov-02/1:41 PM |
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Assuming this is ending on a positive note, I like it.
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| Re: The Bomb by anitawit |
9-Nov-02/1:53 PM |
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This is pretty good. I hope your "grey cells" aren't cancerous or infectious or anything.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
10-Nov-02/6:21 PM |
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I read this, passed, and came back to it. I'm glad I did. It gave me a chance to score correctly.10
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| Re: Shwe Nat by shwenatjadeflower |
10-Nov-02/6:24 PM |
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Now I have a reason to put some effot into my dragon. A battle is sure to ensue.
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| Re: Goodbye by Nicholas Jones |
11-Nov-02/3:37 PM |
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I'll come back to this a couple of times before I number it.
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| Re: IF Now! by feathers68 |
12-Nov-02/11:28 AM |
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I'm taking the innocent death road with this. Liked it
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
12-Nov-02/12:14 PM |
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I've never seen anything this big from you before! I'm shocked! I'm agasp! I'm crying. This doesn't feel like a first daft though.ditto
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
12-Nov-02/12:17 PM |
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Death? Or a beautifully sad Italian piece of music? Either way....
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
12-Nov-02/12:45 PM |
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Careful, lest ye carry the weight of all mothers:)
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| Re: more than i bargained for by Limness |
12-Nov-02/7:12 PM |
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Fast and furious. good stuff, maynard.
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| Re: Ode to a Depleted Uranium Shell by Yardbird |
13-Nov-02/10:26 AM |
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Some days I wish it would shower us with it's envious love.
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