on You'll Never Hear by confuzdlilgirl
5 Nov 2002, 3:25 PM
It's good to feel, but don't let it consume you. Walk with us, slowly, and you'll be fine. Both pieces are emotionally saturated. You have pattern and rythm though, something I struggle for. 5/5
on some deleted poem
6 Nov 2002, 5:22 AM
He will wait into eternity for you.
"Vesuvian in my impetuousness" killer.
"Vesuvian in my impetuousness" killer.
on everyone sucks. by kliq
6 Nov 2002, 5:47 AM
I like the message. I think it could use some dressing up though.
on some deleted poem
6 Nov 2002, 6:29 PM
You can't hide your faith from me. It shows in your writing.
on Some Things by Christof
7 Nov 2002, 6:46 AM
Boy are the girls gonna love this! I see what you mean about compressing lines together. I think I can afford to do that. Oh how I wish I could relate to all that goes on here. I can read though, I suppose that gives me an advantage. Nice work, as usual. I forgot that libraries can be sensual.(Thanks N.J.) Gotta work on my piece about an old building I "loved" when I was younger. Interestins swap of characters here too. I'll round up.
on some deleted poem
7 Nov 2002, 6:51 AM
The evil dictators list is longer than Santas' for Christs' sake! How are we gonna do that? Funny stuff.
on some deleted poem
7 Nov 2002, 4:46 PM
Maybe I should "get busy". Might help my work. Nice a m quickie. Feels a little harsh though.
on Search of Love by loneshadow29
9 Nov 2002, 1:18 PM
Damn! Damn good! Hua!
on Plastic People by cosmiccantinaguy
9 Nov 2002, 1:37 PM
Well, there goes my theory about bums having the most freedom! HA! What was I thinking? 8 for your eye-poking the rich and "synthetic infection"
on candela by poetic-chaos
9 Nov 2002, 1:41 PM
Assuming this is ending on a positive note, I like it.
on some deleted poem
10 Nov 2002, 6:21 PM
I read this, passed, and came back to it. I'm glad I did. It gave me a chance to score correctly.10
on Shwe Nat by shwenatjadeflower
10 Nov 2002, 6:24 PM
Now I have a reason to put some effot into my dragon. A battle is sure to ensue.
on Goodbye by Nicholas Jones
11 Nov 2002, 3:37 PM
I'll come back to this a couple of times before I number it.
on IF Now! by feathers68
12 Nov 2002, 11:28 AM
I'm taking the innocent death road with this. Liked it
on some deleted poem
12 Nov 2002, 12:14 PM
I've never seen anything this big from you before! I'm shocked! I'm agasp! I'm crying. This doesn't feel like a first daft though.ditto
on some deleted poem
12 Nov 2002, 12:17 PM
Death? Or a beautifully sad Italian piece of music? Either way....
on some deleted poem
12 Nov 2002, 12:45 PM
Careful, lest ye carry the weight of all mothers:)
on more than i bargained for by Limness
12 Nov 2002, 7:12 PM
Fast and furious. good stuff, maynard.
on Ode to a Depleted Uranium Shell by Yardbird
13 Nov 2002, 10:26 AM
Some days I wish it would shower us with it's envious love.