Re: No recalculations needed by Bachus	13-Nov-02/2:42 PM
Personally, I recieved this well. It felt balanced.8 plus an imaginary 1/2
Re: The Wooden Armchair Of Similar Dreams by Caducus	14-Nov-02/4:00 PM
I'm on the posi-side here. And another vote for (derelict peace). I want to write something like this for my mom, I'm just not ready yet. Fab read indeed.
Re: The Wooden Armchair Of Similar Dreams by Caducus	14-Nov-02/4:05 PM
I keep reading this and I think it deserves exaltation beyond p/r.
regarding some deleted poem...	14-Nov-02/4:19 PM
I'm sorry, what changed?10
Re: My love for another. by cleverdevice	15-Nov-02/6:05 AM
Great quality of content. If you can, tweak this to Nicholas' suggestions. I'd like to learn how to do this and this could be a good example. thanks
Re: One Country by poetandknowit	15-Nov-02/7:33 AM
For some reason,"alluvial" doesn't seem to fit. sounds like a brief geology lesson. I dunno.
regarding some deleted poem...	15-Nov-02/1:49 PM
I have to take my time with this one, I'll vote after a few readings.tastes good so far.
regarding some deleted poem...	15-Nov-02/1:58 PM
Much smoother than previous. A reversely drawn checkmark? Interesting twist. I smell a slight hint of zzinnia. good/bad I dunno. Your efforts are not in vain.
Re: His Mother's Son by vulcan	15-Nov-02/2:20 PM
Wow, great tug of emotional war here. I can't imagine what women go through.
Re: Stuck in the Past... by loneshadow29	16-Nov-02/7:18 AM
Dude, this is true. And if you want, a great place to start progressing.
Re: The Fox by cleverdevice	16-Nov-02/3:32 PM
Great! Amongst the many things I have to learn about here, now I gotta research foxes too? fuck. Oh well,learn sumpn new every day right?8
regarding some deleted poem...	17-Nov-02/7:54 AM
You are skilled. Why do you bother with small stuff like this.
regarding some deleted poem...	17-Nov-02/2:23 PM
Dare I suggest what this is about? I found nothing that bothered me. I am,however,shy on experience.
Re: Every single days's the same (Acrostic) by [mojo]	17-Nov-02/2:27 PM
Um, I didn't. Never heard of it 'till now. Thanks for the lesson.
Re: "Why would I need to get in touch with you?" by Limness	18-Nov-02/6:04 AM
probably me, after that little stunt "dynamic duo". Very accurate,L .
Re: My love for another. by cleverdevice	18-Nov-02/7:37 AM
Yes, most excellent I think. With or without perfection.
regarding some deleted poem...	18-Nov-02/7:44 AM
Ok. This speaks to me of a stripper who is aware of her situation. Who might be "saved" by someone else, a male perhaps, but is comfortable and at least a little happy doing what she does in the city.
Re: "Why would I need to get in touch with you?" by Limness	18-Nov-02/2:46 PM
The change is an improvement. I would drop one "nothing". Or, last line : Did not blink. I dunno, scribble it on paper first.
Re: My love for another. by cleverdevice	18-Nov-02/3:01 PM
L-7 Replace "who" with a comma?
regarding some deleted poem...	20-Nov-02/2:44 PM
You can't save the world mom. But thanks for pointing us in the right direction. Obvious but I liked it anyway.