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candela (Free verse) by poetic-chaos
life's travesty plays before our eyes.
one moment *bang* took it so far --
yet not really...
& into the distance flows the gaze
entertained the emotions
until they became the backdrop
now...
break the chains
contemplate an unborn star
for a change
take the reigns
& be quick to steal away
forget what is said
& what is done
& be the candela.
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Weighted score: 4.846319
Overall Rank: 10611
Posted: November 8, 2002 9:53 AM PST; Last modified: November 8, 2002 9:53 AM PST
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