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candela (Free verse) by poetic-chaos
life's travesty plays before our eyes. one moment *bang* took it so far -- yet not really... & into the distance flows the gaze entertained the emotions until they became the backdrop now... break the chains contemplate an unborn star for a change take the reigns & be quick to steal away forget what is said & what is done & be the candela.

Up the ladder: Angers Blood!
Down the ladder: Time

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.428571
Weighted score: 4.846319
Overall Rank: 10605
Posted: November 8, 2002 9:53 AM PST; Last modified: November 8, 2002 9:53 AM PST
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[7] INTRANSIT @ 152.163.188.228 | 9-Nov-02/1:41 PM | Reply
Assuming this is ending on a positive note, I like it.
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