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candela (Free verse) by poetic-chaos

life's travesty plays before our eyes. one moment *bang* took it so far -- yet not really... & into the distance flows the gaze entertained the emotions until they became the backdrop now... break the chains contemplate an unborn star for a change take the reigns & be quick to steal away forget what is said & what is done & be the candela.

INTRANSIT 9-Nov-02/1:41 PM
Assuming this is ending on a positive note, I like it.




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