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Time (Lyric) by marvelis It comes
As it goes.
It goes
As it comes.
Controls all that is known.
Ends all that is known.
Its value is grand,
Leaves us with a dread.
So what really matters?
What really counts?
We cannot escape it.
Merely accept it.
Can our actions withstand?
As we cannot stand.
Could our actions be the secret?
To defeat it?
Only time will tell.
Up the ladder:
candela
Down the ladder:
My friend
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 4.428571
Posted: December 18, 2002 4:28 PM PST; Last modified: December 18, 2002 5:09 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.846319 Overall Rank: 10612 Comments:
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Caducus @ 62.105.88.10
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19-Dec-02/4:31 AM
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USER INTRANSIT, wrote a line about ripping the guts from a grandfather clock, i cant recall the title but you would like that poem of his (ask him). This was quite intelligently written, and i think a 3 votes a bit negative, maybe do this as a haiku ? think of some choice lines **6**
well...if anything..this poem helped me appreciate my coffe a bit more. take a three, and go back to your fucking hobbit riddles. you're about as marvelis as 90210 re-runs hith a midget riding around a saddled bull mastiff naked with a tin foil hat and cap gun. galavanting around my house while a constantly hit rewind play rewind play tookie hat play smookie hey! PLAY BOMBAY! hey! hey hat! HAY! HAY! HAY! fuck.. broke a nail. shit.
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