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Time (Lyric) by marvelis

It comes As it goes. It goes As it comes. Controls all that is known. Ends all that is known. Its value is grand, Leaves us with a dread. So what really matters? What really counts? We cannot escape it. Merely accept it. Can our actions withstand? As we cannot stand. Could our actions be the secret? To defeat it? Only time will tell.

horus8 19-Dec-02/10:45 AM
well...if anything..this poem helped me appreciate my coffe a bit more. take a three, and go back to your fucking hobbit riddles. you're about as marvelis as 90210 re-runs hith a midget riding around a saddled bull mastiff naked with a tin foil hat and cap gun. galavanting around my house while a constantly hit rewind play rewind play tookie hat play smookie hey! PLAY BOMBAY! hey! hey hat! HAY! HAY! HAY! fuck.. broke a nail. shit.




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