on Cat by Topaz Servias
7 Jan 2003, 6:05 PM
go over this with a fine tooth comb. Quite funny. no vote till tweaked.
on electronically by Quarton
7 Jan 2003, 6:10 PM
ITS TWOO! ITS TWOO! Nice job Mr.ton Say, when is Jupiter supposed to pass near the U.S.?
on insomnia by Bill Z Bub
7 Jan 2003, 7:42 PM
I like it as is. But what do I know
I drive a truck.
I drive a truck.
on some deleted poem
7 Jan 2003, 8:07 PM
gots potatoes though.
on dollar collar by rosiebailey
8 Jan 2003, 6:47 AM
S&M not what its cracked up to be,eh?
on some deleted poem
8 Jan 2003, 6:53 AM
I don't know if you want it this way or not. 1 ding for the occasional off-rhyme.
on Damn Americans by T'ien
8 Jan 2003, 7:01 AM
no. but I can spell c-z-e-c-h-o-s
uh, Damn! where's my dictionary?!!!
uh, Damn! where's my dictionary?!!!
on Seasoning a new tank by Cha no Onna
14 Jan 2003, 11:49 AM
Why this has not recieved more attention is beyond me. The secondary theme is there, I haven't found it yet. This is amazing.
on some deleted poem
14 Jan 2003, 6:33 PM
Funny, I find (deep-throated) obscene. but not (whore). I think you could kick this up to classy if you wanted. 2 dings
on The Poem of an Eighth-Grader by jessicazee
14 Jan 2003, 6:35 PM
Middle school genius.
on Skin on My Soup by jessicazee
14 Jan 2003, 6:37 PM
TOO fun. WAAAAAAAY too fun.
on 'Fucky Fucky 5 Dollar' by scitz
15 Jan 2003, 9:26 AM
scary. sad. meritable.
on Baked Peach Cobbler Windowed by horus8
15 Jan 2003, 5:57 PM
Good for you Mr H. Nice and slow, take your time.
on some deleted poem
16 Jan 2003, 2:55 PM
The adjustments are worthwhile(obviously). The ending is much better. I suspect you are not done yet?
on some deleted poem
16 Jan 2003, 2:58 PM
Similar to something else you wrote a while a go. Liked that one better.
on some deleted poem
16 Jan 2003, 3:00 PM
Not sure about te first line, but deep and fanciful, it is it is.
on some deleted poem
16 Jan 2003, 3:20 PM
You mentioned -playfully-before -whore. thats why I wans't offended.
I think you could get away with
(resonant) word.
I think you could get away with
(resonant) word.
on some deleted poem
16 Jan 2003, 3:21 PM
Word picking is tricky,yes?
on some deleted poem
16 Jan 2003, 3:25 PM
I can't put my finger quite on what I don't like here. The overall works but....
on Just clubbing fur seals by <{Baba^Yaga}>
17 Jan 2003, 6:17 AM
Whether or not this is about some one matters not, to me. I wish I could comment on this with some form of intelligence. Being that iI can't, I like it.