| Re: Cat by Topaz Servias |
7-Jan-03/6:05 PM |
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go over this with a fine tooth comb. Quite funny. no vote till tweaked.
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| Re: electronically by Quarton |
7-Jan-03/6:10 PM |
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ITS TWOO! ITS TWOO! Nice job Mr.ton Say, when is Jupiter supposed to pass near the U.S.?
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| Re: insomnia by Bill Z Bub |
7-Jan-03/7:42 PM |
I like it as is. But what do I know
I drive a truck.
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7-Jan-03/8:07 PM |
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| Re: dollar collar by rosiebailey |
8-Jan-03/6:47 AM |
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S&M not what its cracked up to be,eh?
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8-Jan-03/6:53 AM |
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I don't know if you want it this way or not. 1 ding for the occasional off-rhyme.
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| Re: Damn Americans by T'ien |
8-Jan-03/7:01 AM |
no. but I can spell c-z-e-c-h-o-s
uh, Damn! where's my dictionary?!!!
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| Re: Seasoning a new tank by Cha no Onna |
14-Jan-03/11:49 AM |
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Why this has not recieved more attention is beyond me. The secondary theme is there, I haven't found it yet. This is amazing.
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14-Jan-03/6:33 PM |
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Funny, I find (deep-throated) obscene. but not (whore). I think you could kick this up to classy if you wanted. 2 dings
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| Re: The Poem of an Eighth-Grader by jessicazee |
14-Jan-03/6:35 PM |
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| Re: Skin on My Soup by jessicazee |
14-Jan-03/6:37 PM |
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TOO fun. WAAAAAAAY too fun.
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| Re: 'Fucky Fucky 5 Dollar' by scitz |
15-Jan-03/9:26 AM |
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| Re: Baked Peach Cobbler Windowed by horus8 |
15-Jan-03/5:57 PM |
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Good for you Mr H. Nice and slow, take your time.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
16-Jan-03/2:55 PM |
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The adjustments are worthwhile(obviously). The ending is much better. I suspect you are not done yet?
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16-Jan-03/2:58 PM |
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Similar to something else you wrote a while a go. Liked that one better.
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16-Jan-03/3:00 PM |
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Not sure about te first line, but deep and fanciful, it is it is.
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16-Jan-03/3:20 PM |
You mentioned -playfully-before -whore. thats why I wans't offended.
I think you could get away with
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16-Jan-03/3:21 PM |
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Word picking is tricky,yes?
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16-Jan-03/3:25 PM |
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I can't put my finger quite on what I don't like here. The overall works but....
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| Re: Just clubbing fur seals by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
17-Jan-03/6:17 AM |
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Whether or not this is about some one matters not, to me. I wish I could comment on this with some form of intelligence. Being that iI can't, I like it.
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