on some deleted poem
18 Jan 2003, 7:21 AM
Interesting info, indeed.
Here's one:
If carrots are good for your eyes and masturbating will make you go blind, can you break even?
Here's one:
If carrots are good for your eyes and masturbating will make you go blind, can you break even?
on Nightshades by Bachus
18 Jan 2003, 7:31 AM
The best I've read this a.m.
on The man who sold his wife by Bachus
18 Jan 2003, 7:40 AM
I'm sure he's not the only one.
on A black sanded tropical vision by horus8
18 Jan 2003, 7:25 PM
I get a little lost with (specialized orangery). 6-2 add comma before (so) also?
on what little I know by nentwined
19 Jan 2003, 5:51 AM
Bendy. Cool. kenned? ok. kenned.
on Dr. Skellington by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
20 Jan 2003, 6:23 AM
And tortles too.
on some deleted poem
20 Jan 2003, 6:32 AM
I dont know jack about vids. AIR HOCKEY! The writ is true.
on Trials of life haikus by <{Baba^Yaga}>
20 Jan 2003, 6:35 AM
GO rillas? I'd like to watch the olympics, but what happens when the gorillas turn the tables?
on Mooseknuckle MacFoofingtons by Bachus
20 Jan 2003, 6:39 AM
The underlying story is killer. My favorite kind of truth.
on The Militarization of America by Quarton
20 Jan 2003, 3:58 PM
Sorry Q-man. We're with you at heart on this, just not the poetic angle. work it, baby, Own it.
on some deleted poem
21 Jan 2003, 4:18 PM
Not necessarily poor. I saw a contrast of technology to lack of heat, or priorities. A possibility?
on some deleted poem
21 Jan 2003, 4:26 PM
excellente.
on 2 weeks and a day by Bill Z Bub
21 Jan 2003, 4:31 PM
don't be afraid of pattern on this, it works.
on some deleted poem
22 Jan 2003, 7:00 AM
seems you are nearing the end with this. I still prefer the otra title.
on Ode to spoons by Dostoyevsky
22 Jan 2003, 7:04 AM
small stainlees scoop of happiness.
on some deleted poem
22 Jan 2003, 7:08 AM
nothing like a self destructive mom eh? mine? alcoholism,53. alkie breath is pretty gross too.
on Minoan lover by Jeremi B. Handrinos
22 Jan 2003, 7:22 AM
My name is Maximus Desimus Meridius
Commander of the armies of the north
General of the felix legions
Loyal servant to the true emporer
Marcus Aurelius.
Father to a murdered son,
husband to a murdered wife,
and I will have my vengeance,
in this life or the next.
Commander of the armies of the north
General of the felix legions
Loyal servant to the true emporer
Marcus Aurelius.
Father to a murdered son,
husband to a murdered wife,
and I will have my vengeance,
in this life or the next.
a perfect villanelle. Contact someone smarter than I. 8