regarding some deleted poem...	5-Jan-03/7:51 AM
I enjoyed this also.
Re: Sticks and Stones Farm, Pot Luck Thursday Nights by <~>	6-Jan-03/6:44 AM
let me slurk some coffee and we'll get down to business. Definitely smoother.
Re: Sticks and Stones Farm, Pot Luck Thursday Nights by <~>	6-Jan-03/8:38 AM
I see you've already tweaked the first stanza. still looming twice. I'm holding the vote.
regarding some deleted poem...	6-Jan-03/8:40 AM
what goes around comes around,slick.
regarding some deleted poem...	6-Jan-03/8:41 AM
Too fun.
Re: Jewel by cleverdevice	6-Jan-03/8:45 AM
How did it impact the floor? harshly? L-13, merge it with L-14. It's great when something so small can have an impact so big.
regarding some deleted poem...	6-Jan-03/8:48 AM
Caducus, dude. First stanza seems limerick like in rythm. Try making that rythm carry through. or not. 8
Re: A Man's Best Friend. by DewDrop	6-Jan-03/8:50 AM
Interestin twist.
Re: My sad life by Bobjim the II	6-Jan-03/3:36 PM
Definitely funny!!
Re: Sticks and Stones Farm, Pot Luck Thursday Nights by <~>	6-Jan-03/3:41 PM
Um, did I piss you off? This is better,though.
Re: Shark by cleverdevice	7-Jan-03/6:37 AM
I'll see your shark and raise you a......
Re: To the memory of Leonie Rysanek by vulcan	7-Jan-03/7:08 AM
Yes, well done.
regarding some deleted poem...	7-Jan-03/7:15 AM
Target destroyed.
regarding some deleted poem...	7-Jan-03/7:17 AM
much said here.
Re: Midnight in the Garden by Cha no Onna	7-Jan-03/9:39 AM
I cant find the changes.Still like it.
Re: Frustration by DewDrop	7-Jan-03/9:41 AM
dona matter what eet ees. eees goot.
Re: Into the Deep by Owner of the Sky	7-Jan-03/2:51 PM
apologiZe. change salt to gravel, I think. vellynize. aint seen you in a coons age. howaya,K?
Re: Home by Owner of the Sky	7-Jan-03/2:54 PM
I concur. This is good raw. Bake it better.
Re: Backwards baby blend by Blade	7-Jan-03/5:52 PM
Contrasting hard/soft and cold/warm. Interesting mix indeed.
regarding some deleted poem...	7-Jan-03/6:02 PM
Break 1-9 for a reality check!