on some deleted poem
5 Jan 2003, 7:51 AM
I enjoyed this also.
on Sticks and Stones Farm, Pot Luck Thursday Nights by <~>
6 Jan 2003, 6:44 AM
let me slurk some coffee and we'll get down to business. Definitely smoother.
on Sticks and Stones Farm, Pot Luck Thursday Nights by <~>
6 Jan 2003, 8:38 AM
I see you've already tweaked the first stanza. still looming twice.
I'm holding the vote.
I'm holding the vote.
on some deleted poem
6 Jan 2003, 8:40 AM
what goes around comes around,slick.
on some deleted poem
6 Jan 2003, 8:41 AM
Too fun.
on Jewel by cleverdevice
6 Jan 2003, 8:45 AM
How did it impact the floor? harshly? L-13, merge it with L-14.
It's great when something so small can have an impact so big.
It's great when something so small can have an impact so big.
on some deleted poem
6 Jan 2003, 8:48 AM
Caducus, dude. First stanza seems limerick like in rythm. Try making that rythm carry through. or not.
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on A Man's Best Friend. by DewDrop
6 Jan 2003, 8:50 AM
Interestin twist.
on My sad life by Bobjim the II
6 Jan 2003, 3:36 PM
Definitely funny!!
on Sticks and Stones Farm, Pot Luck Thursday Nights by <~>
6 Jan 2003, 3:41 PM
Um, did I piss you off?
This is better,though.
This is better,though.
on Shark by cleverdevice
7 Jan 2003, 6:37 AM
I'll see your shark and raise you
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on To the memory of Leonie Rysanek by vulcan
7 Jan 2003, 7:08 AM
Yes, well done.
on some deleted poem
7 Jan 2003, 7:15 AM
Target destroyed.
on some deleted poem
7 Jan 2003, 7:17 AM
much said here.
on Midnight in the Garden by Cha no Onna
7 Jan 2003, 9:39 AM
I cant find the changes.Still like it.
on Frustration by DewDrop
7 Jan 2003, 9:41 AM
dona matter what eet ees. eees goot.
on Into the Deep by Owner of the Sky
7 Jan 2003, 2:51 PM
apologiZe. change salt to gravel, I think. vellynize. aint seen you in a coons age. howaya,K?
on Home by Owner of the Sky
7 Jan 2003, 2:54 PM
I concur. This is good raw. Bake it better.
on Backwards baby blend by Blade
7 Jan 2003, 5:52 PM
Contrasting hard/soft and cold/warm. Interesting mix indeed.
on some deleted poem
7 Jan 2003, 6:02 PM
Break 1-9 for a reality check!