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Sonnet № 33509

Midnight in the Garden

Member since 2002 · Posted 3 Jan 2003 · Edited 7 Jan 2003 · 4 comments

My child, you are cold, bare, lost and alone In this wilderness! Don't be afraid; my Skin is not like yours but thoughts the same. No? Why shrink you from my touch and seek the sky? Forbidden? But what's the harm? I cannot Deceive you, for you are flesh of mine and I will you no ill. What have you been taught? Can you think for yourself? Why is it banned? How can it hurt one who does not know pain; Indeed, knows naught but fruitless, lustful sow And grazing. He knew me too; I would fain Raise you from stagnation. I give choice. Know -- Innocence is death, eat life and succumb; Knowledge first, and then grow to wisdom.

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4 comments

[8] INTRANSIT 7-Jan-03/9:39 AM Reply
I cant find the changes.Still like it.
[n/a] Cha no Onna › INTRANSIT 7-Jan-03/9:49 AM Reply
I gave it a name. Thanks for the vote. :)
If you didn't see it earlier, cha no onna means woman of tea in Japanese.
[8] INTRANSIT › Cha no Onna 7-Jan-03/2:42 PM Reply
Duh! My bad. PK is right, I'm not very observant. pleh.
wunnerful name though, on both accounts.
[7] Bachus 7-Jan-03/10:40 AM Reply
MOLLYCODDLE.