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Midnight in the Garden (Sonnet) by Cha no Onna
My child, you are cold, bare, lost and alone In this wilderness! Don't be afraid; my Skin is not like yours but thoughts the same. No? Why shrink you from my touch and seek the sky? Forbidden? But what's the harm? I cannot Deceive you, for you are flesh of mine and I will you no ill. What have you been taught? Can you think for yourself? Why is it banned? How can it hurt one who does not know pain; Indeed, knows naught but fruitless, lustful sow And grazing. He knew me too; I would fain Raise you from stagnation. I give choice. Know -- Innocence is death, eat life and succumb; Knowledge first, and then grow to wisdom.

Up the ladder: Stray
Down the ladder: Flow

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.375
Weighted score: 6.211096
Overall Rank: 971
Posted: January 3, 2003 3:05 PM PST; Last modified: January 7, 2003 9:11 AM PST
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[8] INTRANSIT @ 64.12.96.46 | 7-Jan-03/9:39 AM | Reply
I cant find the changes.Still like it.
[n/a] Cha no Onna @ 206.110.252.242 > INTRANSIT | 7-Jan-03/9:49 AM | Reply
I gave it a name. Thanks for the vote. :)
If you didn't see it earlier, cha no onna means woman of tea in Japanese.
[8] INTRANSIT @ 64.12.96.139 > Cha no Onna | 7-Jan-03/2:42 PM | Reply
Duh! My bad. PK is right, I'm not very observant. pleh.
wunnerful name though, on both accounts.
[7] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 7-Jan-03/10:40 AM | Reply
MOLLYCODDLE.
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