| Re: Hewed by horus8 |
1-Jan-03/7:21 PM |
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I don't know whether to cry, or be scared as hell.
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2-Jan-03/6:44 AM |
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More telling than showing, but not half bad anyway.
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| Re: unsent by Bill Z Bub |
2-Jan-03/6:52 AM |
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The "tundra" line seems to not qite fit for me. Good start otherwise. Plenty of material for moulding here.
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| Re: Kernel by anitawit |
2-Jan-03/11:33 AM |
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2-Jan-03/11:37 AM |
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Death as a sin, interesting.
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| Re: Epistemology (2nd draft) by Ranger |
2-Jan-03/3:13 PM |
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Killer draft,man. Sorry, I have no clue what epi.... what the hell was that again?
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| Re: Mannequin (draft) by Ranger |
2-Jan-03/3:16 PM |
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Did you eve see my "Morning conflict"? If not, tell me and I'll repost. I don't know what to do with this piece. Feels just short, for some reason.
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3-Jan-03/6:56 AM |
Not that this is bad, it's not, it just seems a long trip to say "I stayed sober for the new years festivities and it was worthwhile"
I wanted to ding you for the glowing radio dial, but I can't. I also would like to express my apology for coming at you badly at times. I would like to see what you can do with another form of poetry,sometime. May the gods of Misery be fruitful upon you in the coming year.
Rich
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| Re: unsent by Bill Z Bub |
3-Jan-03/8:30 AM |
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3-Jan-03/1:07 PM |
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Is this a redux? It feels benefitted.
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| Re: Sticks and Stones Farm, Pot Luck Thursday Nights by <~> |
3-Jan-03/3:49 PM |
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please keep the kid with the chocolate pie.
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| Re: I Retry My Resolve by Nicholas Jones |
3-Jan-03/3:53 PM |
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Is there a way to lose (1) "resolve line. preferably S-2 L-3. Other than that I wouldn't touch it.
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4-Jan-03/7:59 AM |
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Somebody raped a ferret? Sorry, I don't get it.
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| Re: The poemranker desk by lunar |
4-Jan-03/9:57 AM |
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| Re: No Logic by debased |
4-Jan-03/10:37 AM |
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5-Jan-03/7:36 AM |
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| Re: Multiplicity the Hallucination by vulcan |
5-Jan-03/7:41 AM |
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And we're puttin it on wax!! It's the new syle!!! 4and 3and 2 and 1......
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| Re: A Stressful Moment by suzanna |
5-Jan-03/7:46 AM |
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No you will have only begun.
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| Re: Someone please say no. by suzanna |
5-Jan-03/7:48 AM |
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What is normal? Great Idea, too plain. add color.
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| Re: NEEDING TO REFORM by suzanna |
5-Jan-03/7:50 AM |
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