on Hewed by horus8
1 Jan 2003, 7:21 PM
I don't know whether to cry, or be scared as hell.
on some deleted poem
2 Jan 2003, 6:44 AM
More telling than showing, but not half bad anyway.
on unsent by Bill Z Bub
2 Jan 2003, 6:52 AM
The "tundra" line seems to not qite fit for me. Good start otherwise. Plenty of material for moulding here.
on some deleted poem
2 Jan 2003, 11:37 AM
Death as a sin, interesting.
on Epistemology (2nd draft) by Ranger
2 Jan 2003, 3:13 PM
Killer draft,man. Sorry, I have no clue what epi.... what the hell was that again?
on Mannequin (draft) by Ranger
2 Jan 2003, 3:16 PM
Did you eve see my "Morning conflict"? If not, tell me and I'll repost. I don't know what to do with this piece. Feels just short, for some reason.
on some deleted poem
3 Jan 2003, 6:56 AM
Not that this is bad, it's not, it just seems a long trip to say "I stayed sober for the new years festivities and it was worthwhile"
I wanted to ding you for the glowing radio dial, but I can't. I also would like to express my apology for coming at you badly at times. I would like to see what you can do with another form of poetry,sometime. May the gods of Misery be fruitful upon you in the coming year.
Rich
I wanted to ding you for the glowing radio dial, but I can't. I also would like to express my apology for coming at you badly at times. I would like to see what you can do with another form of poetry,sometime. May the gods of Misery be fruitful upon you in the coming year.
Rich
on unsent by Bill Z Bub
3 Jan 2003, 8:30 AM
Yup.
on some deleted poem
3 Jan 2003, 1:07 PM
Is this a redux? It feels benefitted.
on Sticks and Stones Farm, Pot Luck Thursday Nights by <~>
3 Jan 2003, 3:49 PM
please keep the kid with the chocolate pie.
on I Retry My Resolve by Nicholas Jones
3 Jan 2003, 3:53 PM
Is there a way to lose (1) "resolve line. preferably S-2 L-3. Other than that I wouldn't touch it.
on some deleted poem
4 Jan 2003, 7:59 AM
Somebody raped a ferret? Sorry, I don't get it.
on The poemranker desk by lunar
4 Jan 2003, 9:57 AM
Funny.
on some deleted poem
5 Jan 2003, 7:36 AM
Simply beautiful.
on Multiplicity the Hallucination by vulcan
5 Jan 2003, 7:41 AM
And we're puttin it on wax!! It's the new syle!!! 4and 3and 2 and 1......
on A Stressful Moment by suzanna
5 Jan 2003, 7:46 AM
No you will have only begun.
on Someone please say no. by suzanna
5 Jan 2003, 7:48 AM
What is normal? Great Idea, too plain. add color.
on NEEDING TO REFORM by suzanna
5 Jan 2003, 7:50 AM
Best of dthe three.