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Someone please say no. (Free verse) by suzanna Is this the end?
... to all the love songs playing at night?
... to all the happiness thriving in the house?
... to all the nights out with the family?
... to all the times when we had heart to heart talks?
Is this the end?
...to all the rebelling and arguments?
...to family dinners?
... to parents'night outs?
... to see mom and dad beside one another?
Is this the end?
... to see someone help out the family?
... to put order in the house?
... to fix the garage?
How will our lives go about after this turmoil?
How will we all live?
Is it too late to fix things back to normal??
Up the ladder:
how you never leave me
Down the ladder:
Summer Lights
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Posted: January 5, 2003 2:42 AM PST; Last modified: January 5, 2003 2:42 AM PSTWeighted score: 4.8410625 Overall Rank: 10635 Comments:
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5-Jan-03/7:48 AM
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What is normal? Great Idea, too plain. add color.
now i know you're full of shit.
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