Re: The Coming Light by poetandknowit	24-Dec-02/9:33 AM
Too bad despair wins. Not my cup of tea,you might have guessed
Re: Garden of confusion by Sugarbbybuttrfly	24-Dec-02/9:46 AM
Frustrated. Good. Dangerous. Last line needs a (?).
Re: Little Johnie's Jihad by <{Baba^Yaga}>	24-Dec-02/5:32 PM
Yours rocks as well, sir.
regarding some deleted poem...	30-Dec-02/1:22 PM
Fun and truthful:) I likes. Nicely done Mrs. G
Re: Blues by Christof	30-Dec-02/1:25 PM
fan TASTIQUE!
regarding some deleted poem...	30-Dec-02/1:29 PM
2 tings. I hate "Diva",but that's personal. S-3 L-5 You're? Otherwise, a keeper.
regarding some deleted poem...	30-Dec-02/1:42 PM
I think the last stanza could stand alone. More stuff here than you need methinks. Still.....
regarding some deleted poem...	30-Dec-02/1:46 PM
Well, Um, I didn't care much for the ending. And I think you could cut some of the wordiness. Definitely workable.
Re: Instantly by Quarton	30-Dec-02/1:54 PM
No matter how fast we move, Q, we're still too damn slow. Loved S-3. Big number.
regarding some deleted poem...	30-Dec-02/1:59 PM
Both pieces seem to talk about you. I see some talent, spread it around.
regarding some deleted poem...	30-Dec-02/2:02 PM
This rolls very well.
regarding some deleted poem...	31-Dec-02/11:55 AM
Dark AND shiny. Is that possible?
Re: Haffner's Mill by powerline	31-Dec-02/3:34 PM
Dude, this is seriously good. I have something about a building that has yet to go past scrbbled notes. Thank you for the inspiration.
Re: Haffner's Mill by powerline	1-Jan-03/8:08 AM
I particularly like the last stanza. It tells me the storm was a financial or political storm or a mass of people. Not horrible weather. I picture an old church or building with gargoyles. I dinged you two for the "sale".
regarding some deleted poem...	1-Jan-03/8:10 AM
What happened? Your muse go flat? har har.
Re: haunter of the dark by razorgrin	1-Jan-03/8:12 AM
Is he the brother of Imoteph?
Re: KEO - Happy New Year! by Wulf	1-Jan-03/8:20 AM
go on wit yo bad self.
Re: Word Baskets by powerline	1-Jan-03/8:52 AM
Welcome aboard, sir. You know what needs to be with this piece. Suggestion: Look up Christofs' "To a sculpter".
Re: Winter's Cabin by powerline	1-Jan-03/8:56 AM
Go back to the cabin and get more material. This could be stretched nicely.
regarding some deleted poem...	1-Jan-03/5:20 PM
On this alone, I trip on boxfull,for some reason. Both hold their own. Wierdly enough, put both in the blender and puree, maybe.