on The Coming Light by poetandknowit
24 Dec 2002, 9:33 AM
Too bad despair wins. Not my cup of tea,you might have guessed
on Garden of confusion by Sugarbbybuttrfly
24 Dec 2002, 9:46 AM
Frustrated. Good. Dangerous. Last line needs a (?).
on Little Johnie's Jihad by <{Baba^Yaga}>
24 Dec 2002, 5:32 PM
Yours rocks as well, sir.
on some deleted poem
30 Dec 2002, 1:22 PM
Fun and truthful:) I likes. Nicely done Mrs. G
on some deleted poem
30 Dec 2002, 1:29 PM
2 tings. I hate "Diva",but that's personal. S-3 L-5 You're?
Otherwise, a keeper.
Otherwise, a keeper.
on some deleted poem
30 Dec 2002, 1:42 PM
I think the last stanza could stand alone. More stuff here than you need methinks. Still.....
on some deleted poem
30 Dec 2002, 1:46 PM
Well, Um, I didn't care much for the ending. And I think you could cut some of the wordiness. Definitely workable.
on some deleted poem
30 Dec 2002, 1:59 PM
Both pieces seem to talk about you.
I see some talent, spread it around.
I see some talent, spread it around.
on some deleted poem
30 Dec 2002, 2:02 PM
This rolls very well.
on some deleted poem
31 Dec 2002, 11:55 AM
Dark AND shiny. Is that possible?
on Haffner's Mill by powerline
31 Dec 2002, 3:34 PM
Dude, this is seriously good. I have something about a building that has yet to go past scrbbled notes. Thank you for the inspiration.
on Haffner's Mill by powerline
1 Jan 2003, 8:08 AM
I particularly like the last stanza. It tells me the storm was a financial or political storm or a mass of people. Not horrible weather. I picture an old church or building with gargoyles. I dinged you two for the "sale".
on some deleted poem
1 Jan 2003, 8:10 AM
What happened? Your muse go flat?
har har.
har har.
on haunter of the dark by razorgrin
1 Jan 2003, 8:12 AM
Is he the brother of Imoteph?
on KEO - Happy New Year! by Wulf
1 Jan 2003, 8:20 AM
go on wit yo bad self.
on Word Baskets by powerline
1 Jan 2003, 8:52 AM
Welcome aboard, sir. You know what needs to be with this piece. Suggestion: Look up Christofs'
"To a sculpter".
"To a sculpter".
on Winter's Cabin by powerline
1 Jan 2003, 8:56 AM
Go back to the cabin and get more material. This could be stretched nicely.
on some deleted poem
1 Jan 2003, 5:20 PM
On this alone, I trip on boxfull,for some reason. Both hold their own. Wierdly enough, put both in the blender and puree, maybe.