on some deleted poem
15 Dec 2002, 1:13 PM
the door doth swing.....
on fa11ing by Bill Z Bub
18 Dec 2002, 5:12 PM
This kicks ass.
on A christmas thought by keatsImnot
18 Dec 2002, 6:10 PM
Nice twist of the knife there!
on some deleted poem
19 Dec 2002, 4:46 PM
If men could be flowers, I'd be a tall red Canna. Fab read dear. Thank you. If it weren't for goils, who knows what us guys would do with all that time>:>
on some deleted poem
19 Dec 2002, 4:58 PM
I think this is my favorite of yours. Toast! I stink! Shower time!
YAY!
YAY!
on joyriding by Bill Z Bub
19 Dec 2002, 7:04 PM
Hot for teacher? Definitely a thinker.
on some deleted poem
20 Dec 2002, 12:33 PM
Actually it does,G. I try to write whole things as they come to mind,then think and return. Or ask someones opinion. Poetandknowit is right about tinking things through.I haven't written anything new in a while(haulin ass)(and cars too)But this I think is a better way to go about things. Scribble like mad. Then discriminate. I sense 2 possibilities in your scratch. I'm doing req. Anything that you might remember from my archives I will repost before xmas. Pick.
on some deleted poem
20 Dec 2002, 12:41 PM
I'm with G. Alittle tweaking this could be perfect. You're a bad man with a keyboard! Cat walk of ego. Dooooood.
on some deleted poem
20 Dec 2002, 12:41 PM
I'm with G. Alittle tweaking this could be perfect. You're a bad man with a keyboard! Cat walk of ego. Dooooood.
on At the circle K by <{Baba^Yaga}>
20 Dec 2002, 12:48 PM
I still know nothing of music but what I hear. Self plug,last comment? I'll try to get to L.A. Next year. Home comp. on fritz. I'll need thos addresses later,again.
on downtown bus by Bill Z Bub
20 Dec 2002, 5:17 PM
Hey! Down in front! damn people.
on some deleted poem
22 Dec 2002, 3:28 PM
Um, really, REALLY good. You could teach me about how to find a beat. I dont want to spoil this for others so I'll just score
on missing time by Bill Z Bub
22 Dec 2002, 3:34 PM
The "madness" stanza trips some how between wall and door? Close to perfection ,I'd say.
on Here There Be Dragons by blkarakagain
23 Dec 2002, 2:05 PM
7 for the effort. tear it down, weld and machine the crank,magnaflux the rods, new slugs,jugs and plugs. bearings. It'll run good.
on strange beds (1983) by Bill Z Bub
23 Dec 2002, 2:11 PM
S-3 cornfuses me a bit. I am getting young lust from it though.
on some deleted poem
23 Dec 2002, 2:19 PM
"Thats life," and down. Takes a nasty spin. too nasty for my tastes. Otherwise, keep steppin'.
on The Coming Light by poetandknowit
23 Dec 2002, 2:38 PM
I feel something secondary going on here. Can't find it yet. I'll come back.
on Dirty bomb, code name: PLUTONIUM by horus8
24 Dec 2002, 9:25 AM
Again, at my own peril, I liked it.
I think people are jealous of you because you are comfortable in your insanity. Self comfort is something to be admired. if it exists.
I think people are jealous of you because you are comfortable in your insanity. Self comfort is something to be admired. if it exists.