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20 most recent comments by INTRANSIT (1421-1440)

Re: missing time by Bill Z Bub 9-Dec-02/1:27 PM
Personally, I dig the mix of free verse splashed with rhyme. An enjoyable twist. The waking could be an artist, loved it.
Re: Jacaranda by David 9-Dec-02/2:56 PM
A tree perhaps? I shall post mine at once! Oh damn. I cant post till tues. That's it! Some one give me a secondary moniker please!
Re: Jacaranda by David 9-Dec-02/5:47 PM
I read the rest of your stuff and liked it all. What is it about you damn californians that make you write so well? Drugs? Damn. should've done em when I had the chance.
regarding some deleted poem... 10-Dec-02/6:52 AM
S-4 L-2, try "they are" blonde. A rythmic hiccup. A killer piece though. That's why I drive a big slow lumbering truck. ha!
Re: Bilboards, and music, just shouldn't be mixed. by Bachus 10-Dec-02/6:57 AM
What,may I ask, does it take to earn a Bachian swagger award?
Re: Xmas gifts list by lunar 10-Dec-02/9:28 AM
It seems our thoughts are similar somehow.
regarding some deleted poem... 10-Dec-02/9:30 AM
I really like this .
regarding some deleted poem... 10-Dec-02/1:35 PM
Is scirocco Italian for (speed)?
I understand you must go some day please stay in touch with us 'rankers, won't you?
regarding some deleted poem... 10-Dec-02/5:29 PM
terribly fantastic.
regarding some deleted poem... 11-Dec-02/6:42 AM
Excellent. bonus points for liking trees.
regarding some deleted poem... 11-Dec-02/5:23 PM
add to this and HAI-KU it.
regarding some deleted poem... 11-Dec-02/5:25 PM
whassamatter? someone tell you to lick your own bunghole and adhere yourself to the vertical stabilizer of the next shuttle mission?
Re: Goes the Spoils by <~> 11-Dec-02/5:28 PM
either you've done something here or I have an easy minds eye.
regarding some deleted poem... 11-Dec-02/5:29 PM
ok, so besides seeing a bad movie, what happened here?
Re: A Pirate's Sonnet by snacktime 11-Dec-02/5:46 PM
Looks good to me.
regarding some deleted poem... 12-Dec-02/1:51 PM
A lady welding a male statue of sorts,pauses to feel her creation through her gloves but sadly the structure collapses.frustrated she gives up. I dunno. Could be Jumper cables to the nuts for all I know.
Re: Danse by Limness 12-Dec-02/4:02 PM
I can offer nothing but smiles. Holding vote. Looking at secon place only to "unmending".
Re: Transformers "a higher, vaster, deeper meaning". by Bachus 12-Dec-02/4:08 PM
and when they bump us off,who'll be around to buy all that electronic stuff.
regarding some deleted poem... 13-Dec-02/5:49 PM
Be careful what you wish for, you almost got it. ...so my dispatcher calls me and says he has this load going from the windy to the mile high and then a load from denco to L.A. no shit. I turned it down. too close to christmas,truck is old and the possibility of weather . Maybe when the thaw comes I'll go west and we can consummate our little three way. But I owe zzinnia a visit first. TA!

Oh, I like this little bit of yours too.
Re: HGH 1000 (human growth hormone) fountain of youth? by Bachus 15-Dec-02/1:10 PM
Bick house-lol. Damn straight. Where can I get someHGH1000? Wow to be able to lose weight, tone up, feel better and run 24-7! A miracle drug indeed! A miracle it has only ripped off half the population!


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