on missing time by Bill Z Bub
9 Dec 2002, 1:27 PM
Personally, I dig the mix of free verse splashed with rhyme. An enjoyable twist. The waking could be an artist, loved it.
on some deleted poem
10 Dec 2002, 6:52 AM
S-4 L-2, try "they are" blonde. A rythmic hiccup. A killer piece though. That's why I drive a big slow lumbering truck. ha!
on Bilboards, and music, just shouldn't be mixed. by Bachus
10 Dec 2002, 6:57 AM
What,may I ask, does it take to earn a Bachian swagger award?
on Xmas gifts list by lunar
10 Dec 2002, 9:28 AM
It seems our thoughts are similar somehow.
on some deleted poem
10 Dec 2002, 9:30 AM
I really like this .
on some deleted poem
10 Dec 2002, 1:35 PM
Is scirocco Italian for (speed)?
I understand you must go some day please stay in touch with us 'rankers, won't you?
I understand you must go some day please stay in touch with us 'rankers, won't you?
on some deleted poem
10 Dec 2002, 5:29 PM
terribly fantastic.
on some deleted poem
11 Dec 2002, 6:42 AM
Excellent. bonus points for liking trees.
on some deleted poem
11 Dec 2002, 5:23 PM
add to this and HAI-KU it.
on some deleted poem
11 Dec 2002, 5:25 PM
whassamatter? someone tell you to lick your own bunghole and adhere yourself to the vertical stabilizer of the next shuttle mission?
on Goes the Spoils by <~>
11 Dec 2002, 5:28 PM
either you've done something here or I have an easy minds eye.
on some deleted poem
11 Dec 2002, 5:29 PM
ok, so besides seeing a bad movie, what happened here?
on A Pirate's Sonnet by snacktime
11 Dec 2002, 5:46 PM
Looks good to me.
on some deleted poem
12 Dec 2002, 1:51 PM
A lady welding a male statue of sorts,pauses to feel her creation through her gloves but sadly the structure collapses.frustrated she gives up. I dunno. Could be Jumper cables to the nuts for all I know.
on Transformers "a higher, vaster, deeper meaning". by Bachus
12 Dec 2002, 4:08 PM
and when they bump us off,who'll be around to buy all that electronic stuff.
on some deleted poem
13 Dec 2002, 5:49 PM
Be careful what you wish for, you almost got it. ...so my dispatcher calls me and says he has this load going from the windy to the mile high and then a load from denco to L.A. no shit. I turned it down. too close to christmas,truck is old and the possibility of weather . Maybe when the thaw comes I'll go west and we can consummate our little three way. But I owe zzinnia a visit first. TA!
Oh, I like this little bit of yours too.
Oh, I like this little bit of yours too.
on HGH 1000 (human growth hormone) fountain of youth? by Bachus
15 Dec 2002, 1:10 PM
Bick house-lol. Damn straight. Where can I get someHGH1000? Wow to be able to lose weight, tone up, feel better and run 24-7! A miracle drug indeed! A miracle it has only ripped off half the population!