on some deleted poem
29 Nov 2002, 4:56 PM
But gee, wallowing in self pity is so much fun! I would know.
on No One Cares by Quarton
29 Nov 2002, 4:58 PM
Fuck I hate the truth.
on some deleted poem
30 Nov 2002, 7:56 AM
Ok, here's what I woul do. S-2, try to get line 4 to rhyme. Again,
skin, clicking, you've got a pattern there and rhyming s-2 might help the flow a little more.
Just my thoughts. Vote on hold.
skin, clicking, you've got a pattern there and rhyming s-2 might help the flow a little more.
Just my thoughts. Vote on hold.
on some deleted poem
30 Nov 2002, 8:05 AM
L-10 "else I will catch them peripherally" maybe?
on some deleted poem
30 Nov 2002, 8:07 AM
I agree with bachus. Influenced by Whitman?
on There is no Happy Hour in Bakersfield, Ca. by horus8
2 Dec 2002, 4:13 PM
pouring it on,are we? Fine job too!
do it again!
do it again!
on some deleted poem
2 Dec 2002, 4:20 PM
well sweetie,glad you're still here. damnit! don't do that again. that's my gig.8 missed Ya!
on some deleted poem
2 Dec 2002, 4:28 PM
since i'm shy on tech, i'll score on content. This rocks.
on she said by Bill Z Bub
3 Dec 2002, 3:52 PM
Yes, the title gives too much away.
Love the beat! good job devil man.
Love the beat! good job devil man.
on Silence by Cha no Onna
3 Dec 2002, 4:13 PM
Z is big help. always. welcome,and nice entry work too.
on some deleted poem
3 Dec 2002, 4:17 PM
I'm not deeply religious so I must think on this awhile. I like it though.
on want of warmth by <~>
4 Dec 2002, 4:30 AM
another one of your fab 2 way haiku
on Poem For Times Such As These by Nicholas Jones
4 Dec 2002, 4:37 AM
ok then, how about this: thanks foor fucking up my only form of escapism! or, hows about we all ship over to iraq and put ourselves in the line of fire for a "good cause" instead of writing poetry that accomplishes NOTHING!!
on nothing, as today by <~>
4 Dec 2002, 4:41 AM
I'd say you were rightfully movedd.
on Missing the In-Between by <~>
9 Dec 2002, 10:27 AM
Somehow I can't imagine you ever being lonely.
on some deleted poem
9 Dec 2002, 1:03 PM
I was just thinking the other day:
How do slums start? Then I answered: Overcharging real estate owners.
And the band plays on....
How do slums start? Then I answered: Overcharging real estate owners.
And the band plays on....
on some deleted poem
9 Dec 2002, 1:12 PM
That's one bad case of c/t man. It seems to be affecting your brain.
on Walter Cronkite by UnityMitford
9 Dec 2002, 1:14 PM
Maybe a month of his paycheck? I like anything that stabs.
on triple suicide server line by Bill Z Bub
9 Dec 2002, 1:18 PM
I've been through two suicides in my life now.(not me)I'm hardening to them quickly. They're sad and selfish. nothing more. funny write.
on How the Mighty Fall by jdsnyd
9 Dec 2002, 1:21 PM
No arguements here. Keep the left door shut.