regarding some deleted poem...	30-Apr-04/4:17 PM
God's wife might disagree. One nit, and I'm no pro here so use salt if need be, (mostly sad) -,most,sad,. One more comma couldn't hurt.
Re: Air by Bachus	30-Apr-04/4:20 PM
As always.
Re: It's True by jessicazee	1-May-04/7:55 AM
On a humorical note, it's funny. The earnestness however, suggests a health issue. I'm confused.
regarding some deleted poem...	2-May-04/3:56 PM
Oh no I've gone cross-eyed!!!!
Re: the beale street mud festival. by wilco	2-May-04/5:29 PM
(Journey) Ha! What beautiful irony.
Re: Loss by <{Baba^Yaga}>	2-May-04/5:35 PM
You swim so fluidly through the murky waters of your past. My past, not so murky, not clear either.
regarding some deleted poem...	3-May-04/5:44 PM
Something must be hideously wrong here. Too much space? Too slow? The bouncing bird? The (Carte)? Why won't you fly?
Re: Natural Remedy by richa	3-May-04/5:47 PM
"grow tall and tall..." maybe. It's a Whitman thing. I dunno. I like it as is. I tend to overlook burned leaves if the root is strong.
regarding some deleted poem...	4-May-04/5:30 AM
Not to mention the Gods' wife factor.
Re: The Influence of Anxiety by Nicholas Jones	4-May-04/6:52 AM
I'll get back to you. In a hunnert or so years. Poem or not, it is a vehicle to get from your last writ to your next. Most important. Bloomsday? Hmmmm..
Re: Gothic by zodiac	4-May-04/7:11 AM
I disagree. There is a poem in there. What you need is a well trained Ferret. As you know, I am not said Ferret. Put it back in the english wheel.
Re: Vodka kisses & the final sigh. by SupremeDreamer	4-May-04/2:30 PM
Yes. Small nits. Stogies-dump'em. Cigar even works better. Lose (quite) add comma. The bloody morning-suggesting a bloody mary, excellent. Over all 01.
regarding some deleted poem...	4-May-04/5:43 PM
You have done something I have been unable to do without "going off" for some time. Most, not all, but most automobile motorists are: A: Not focused/ distracted by other thoughts besides what they are immediately doing (driving)/(your poem) B: Drive at speeds exceeding their skill level. Anyone can drive at one hundred under a clear sky with no other obstacles. C: Drive too fast for most conditions. Even a clear day has hazards or can change. D: Follow too close. However!! I am NOT saying truck drivers are perfect. They are far from it. They do have more focus. And that's a biggie. See what I mean about going off? Just the tip of the iceberg. Whew! Hand me that paper bag over there, would you? Thanks.
Re: Working at the Garden Market by jessicazee	4-May-04/5:45 PM
impatiens?
Re: When she beats me by Win	5-May-04/1:59 PM
needs a bit of a hint as to what woman we are dealing with here. mom? sis? girlfriend? other? It is worthy of the effort.
Re: The Towel Head Blues by horus8	5-May-04/2:19 PM
I thought it said Eric fucking Stoli....oooopsie.
Re: Beard my Homemade Negro Jesus (Improved! With AIDS!) by Everyone	5-May-04/2:28 PM
I kept one 'cos I'm broke.
regarding some deleted poem...	5-May-04/2:52 PM
Out of my jurisdiction. Just.
regarding some deleted poem...	6-May-04/6:31 AM
Actually there is a fair amount assonance here. Jam packed with stuff here. Excellent, sir.
Re: Beard my Homemade Negro Jesus (Improved! With AIDS!) by Everyone	6-May-04/7:01 AM
3 for length. 3 for humour. 2 for Max Headroom. 2 for Woostuh. -2 for the off beat stanzas. 1 for nuttyness.