on Spring Cleaning by horus8
9 May 2004, 5:35 PM
Would you like me to be less generous and more critical more often?
on some deleted poem
6 May 2004, 7:04 AM
If this doesn't see the top, I swear I'm gonna realease a dump truck full of Bazooka bubble gum on someones head.
on clay or mud (hertz donut version) by nentwined
6 May 2004, 1:20 PM
A. Where is the other version? Searched. Came up penniless.
B. Are you regressing to high school with the donut thing.
Good but not quite you, this time.
B. Are you regressing to high school with the donut thing.
Good but not quite you, this time.
on some deleted poem
7 May 2004, 2:25 PM
Light and fun. The way it should be.
on some deleted poem
7 May 2004, 2:29 PM
And the left brain-right brain connection.
on some deleted poem
7 May 2004, 2:35 PM
I'm sure that -green nut hell- is far worse than any hell I will ever be able to imagine!! Nice one-timer.
on some deleted poem
7 May 2004, 2:51 PM
These are the kind of poems that make me say: You are beyond this website.
on Vodka kisses & the final sigh, v.II (bloody vodka remix) by SupremeDreamer
8 May 2004, 1:13 PM
Better beat, verbage. Quite.
on Ghosts by unknown^user
9 May 2004, 11:33 AM
Love the piece. Hate the commas.
on Spring Cleaning by horus8
9 May 2004, 4:18 PM
I hate to be picky but the lack of reason bugs me. Failed marriage? Death? Who would be around to watch?
Sorry.
Sorry.
on Obituary for the Moon by wilco
9 May 2004, 4:20 PM
Groovy. 'Rita, please. no salt.
on some deleted poem
10 May 2004, 5:36 AM
Check out -Lunge fish-, one of mine. similar motif. The ranker's not giving me an i/d for it. I feel so lost.
on Fighting before bed by zodiac
10 May 2004, 6:39 AM
It's hard for me to believe that anyone could find fault in this. Yet someone with more knowledge than I, might.
on selfhood, through extrospection by nentwined
11 May 2004, 5:45 AM
I have no clue what this means other than the closing line. Still, I like it's originality. Particularly the beat.
on some deleted poem
11 May 2004, 5:58 AM
The folks cursing are doing the stumbling, I assume.
Sidenote: Thank you for all of your comments and help
on my poems. I'm not sure I'd thanked you in a while.
Sidenote: Thank you for all of your comments and help
on my poems. I'm not sure I'd thanked you in a while.
on some deleted poem
11 May 2004, 1:20 PM
clarified.
on Kept by <{Baba^Yaga}>
11 May 2004, 1:55 PM
Excellent.
on some deleted poem
12 May 2004, 12:49 PM
(Lucky) helps. I liked it without the second -buckets-. I understood once I had looked up pales. I thought it was fine. Still great though.
on some deleted poem
12 May 2004, 1:00 PM
Yucaipa feel lately? Ok bad jokes aside. I almost went for El Paso Texas for some reason. I know the coloration of Uranus works but the neme comes across to rudely/humorously. Find another planet or image please. So dirty and classy at the same time, I think youcould lose the *cocks* too. Reword those lines and the flag goes up.