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Air (Ghazal) by Bachus
Invisible shifts, and currents from earth to void
I've toyed around with no better co-dependent.
Than you, and the way you hug your egg
Keeping your waters blue, deep and saltier still.
Tornadoes between cloud and sharp prairie dog
bark; In this wide open expanse, all will blow away.
Direction-less-everywhere, keeper of the spectrum
Filtering the espy of stars from burning us to dust.
Gardens of green cells dividing, seeding, dying
in exchanges of energy too simple to see by eye.
Two way mirror, semi permeable womb, osmosis, I've -
- taken you for granted, because I've become used to you.
All around me, inside of me, modestly carrying me
along breath by breath, storm by storm, sigh by sigh.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0666666
Weighted score: 5.0587196
Overall Rank: 6795
Posted: April 30, 2004 3:15 PM PDT; Last modified: April 30, 2004 3:15 PM PDT
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