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4-Mar-04/7:25 PM |
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Postings like this make me want to give up. I have absolutely nothing critical to say about this, and it wouldn't be coherent if I did. Fine work. Good night.
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5-Mar-04/8:41 AM |
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First read. "slow dance tarantella" according to blah blah blah, the tarantella is a lively dance. I thought about a National Geographic that had an article on Argentina and it's survival which is due in part to the Tango. I saw a couple of things in this and I didn't like subterranean. gotta run. I'll get back with you later.
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6-Mar-04/5:32 AM |
Nicely lean. I'm a little with Mr Mage on not sure what it's about. Seems death-y more than anything else.
A reference to the female spider consuming the male perhaps? I do like the way it hits the ears though.
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6-Mar-04/5:58 AM |
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One nit. You're masters lack of talent confuses me. I got the feeling the master has some kind of neural disfunction and used to be a great puppeteer at some point. Beautiful and sad otherwise.
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7-Mar-04/10:37 AM |
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-feeling like a fool- and -our love is at an end-, both went pimply on me. The rest is great!
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7-Mar-04/6:19 PM |
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and yet another crushing blow is dealt. i hope you brains are as handy with a hammer as you are with words.
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| Re: Fourteen by fevriere |
13-Mar-04/11:43 AM |
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This deserves not to be ignored.
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| Re: Eris, my blade, the accurst villanelle by SupremeDreamer |
13-Mar-04/11:50 AM |
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ok. at this point I'm more worried about your health than your poetry.
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| Re: Eris, my blade, the accurst villanelle by SupremeDreamer |
13-Mar-04/12:02 PM |
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Much better than my first attempt at a villanelle was. Funnier too. Shrill knell. too good.lol.
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| Re: Blinking by zodiac |
14-Mar-04/1:16 PM |
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| Re: Blinking by zodiac |
14-Mar-04/1:59 PM |
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ready sounds better. I still get fearlessness.
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| Re: Lullaby by Goad |
14-Mar-04/2:25 PM |
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as the last to comment, I missed the tweaks and read at least three times before I had anything to say. obviously, I still don't. filling in the blank -9-.
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| Re: My Boyfriend's Afro Pick by horus8 |
14-Mar-04/3:10 PM |
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Just how much Ginsberg have you read?
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16-Mar-04/4:41 AM |
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Half serious, half silly, many practices rolled into one. I likes.
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| Re: My Day Off by wilco |
16-Mar-04/4:47 AM |
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Simple theme, simple rhyme. I like it, anyway
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| Re: Allpoetry.com is to poetry what Asshats are to poetry by Shardik |
16-Mar-04/5:05 AM |
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yes, yes. Give 'em a good Knawk Knawk.
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| Re: Brethren by richa |
16-Mar-04/5:12 AM |
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Why it is that good stuff like this gets overlooked, I'll nevr know.
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16-Mar-04/5:18 AM |
Why not hyApatia? Anyway, where are the other poems you've written? I would add -natures canvas- somehow.
Also, no, damn. The poem just changed on me.
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16-Mar-04/10:06 AM |
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I wish I was more Irish than I am. I wish I could be of more help to you. But you're getting such a grip on the 4th dimension and I have yet to grasp the third.
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| Re: The Politics of Poetry.coms by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
16-Mar-04/3:46 PM |
Sadly, my epiphanys come in single penny doses. My most recent,-as long as you follow, he will lead you anywhere he damn well pleases,- came as a two-center.
You have been blessed. Enjoy.
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