on some deleted poem
4 Mar 2004, 7:25 PM
Postings like this make me want to give up. I have absolutely nothing critical to say about this, and it wouldn't be coherent if I did. Fine work. Good night.
on some deleted poem
5 Mar 2004, 8:41 AM
First read. "slow dance tarantella" according to blah blah blah, the tarantella is a lively dance. I thought about a National Geographic that had an article on Argentina and it's survival which is due in part to the Tango. I saw a couple of things in this and I didn't like subterranean. gotta run. I'll get back with you later.
on some deleted poem
6 Mar 2004, 5:32 AM
Nicely lean. I'm a little with Mr Mage on not sure what it's about. Seems death-y more than anything else.
A reference to the female spider consuming the male perhaps? I do like the way it hits the ears though.
A reference to the female spider consuming the male perhaps? I do like the way it hits the ears though.
on some deleted poem
6 Mar 2004, 5:58 AM
One nit. You're masters lack of talent confuses me. I got the feeling the master has some kind of neural disfunction and used to be a great puppeteer at some point. Beautiful and sad otherwise.
on some deleted poem
7 Mar 2004, 10:37 AM
-feeling like a fool- and -our love is at an end-, both went pimply on me. The rest is great!
on some deleted poem
7 Mar 2004, 6:19 PM
and yet another crushing blow is dealt. i hope you brains are as handy with a hammer as you are with words.
on Eris, my blade, the accurst villanelle by SupremeDreamer
13 Mar 2004, 11:50 AM
ok. at this point I'm more worried about your health than your poetry.
on Eris, my blade, the accurst villanelle by SupremeDreamer
13 Mar 2004, 12:02 PM
Much better than my first attempt at a villanelle was. Funnier too. Shrill knell. too good.lol.
on My Boyfriend's Afro Pick by horus8
14 Mar 2004, 3:10 PM
Just how much Ginsberg have you read?
on some deleted poem
16 Mar 2004, 4:41 AM
Half serious, half silly, many practices rolled into one. I likes.
on My Day Off by wilco
16 Mar 2004, 4:47 AM
Simple theme, simple rhyme. I like it, anyway
on Allpoetry.com is to poetry what Asshats are to poetry by Shardik
16 Mar 2004, 5:05 AM
yes, yes. Give 'em a good Knawk Knawk.
on some deleted poem
16 Mar 2004, 5:18 AM
Why not hyApatia? Anyway, where are the other poems you've written? I would add -natures canvas- somehow.
Also, no, damn. The poem just changed on me.
Also, no, damn. The poem just changed on me.
on some deleted poem
16 Mar 2004, 10:06 AM
I wish I was more Irish than I am. I wish I could be of more help to you. But you're getting such a grip on the 4th dimension and I have yet to grasp the third.
on The Politics of Poetry.coms by <{Baba^Yaga}>
16 Mar 2004, 3:46 PM
Sadly, my epiphanys come in single penny doses. My most recent,-as long as you follow, he will lead you anywhere he damn well pleases,- came as a two-center.
You have been blessed. Enjoy.
You have been blessed. Enjoy.