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27-Jul-04/6:21 AM |
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Absolutely!!!! Sometimes my Legos give me nightmares.
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27-Jul-04/6:30 AM |
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A little slow off the line but the second stanza just smokes the tires!!! Loved it. I'll read the giant later today. welcome.
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| Re: Zin/Enough/Things/Squeeze/Flow by gregsamsa222 |
27-Jul-04/8:42 AM |
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no big pompous words. cliches, used artfully almost unnoticeable. backwards works.
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| Re: The Annual January Thaw by Dovina |
27-Jul-04/5:45 PM |
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| Re: Gap-Fold vs. Sour Milk by Venus |
28-Jul-04/9:08 AM |
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Yes, I like the reform as well.
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| Re: Untitled. by SupremeDreamer |
28-Jul-04/9:12 AM |
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"I could not connect- and be absorbed in a stardust high" excellent line. the rest leaves me...unkempt.
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28-Jul-04/9:14 AM |
The black sequined clutch-perhaps.
I don't like the questions. The rest is dandy.
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| Re: Bon Voyage by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
31-Jul-04/8:45 AM |
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31-Jul-04/8:45 AM |
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Call me an oddball, I like it as-is.
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| Re: Saturn by Bachus |
31-Jul-04/8:50 AM |
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Quarton would be proud, i guess.
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31-Jul-04/9:02 AM |
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My 1.287 cents? I didn't see Mr Moors' film. He's laughing all the way to the bank. did the notes get the job done?
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1-Aug-04/6:19 AM |
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A lawn tractor by Buick. Hmmm. Is that as silly as pooping a Cornish game hen? You may move on now.
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| Re: The Conception of a Dream by wilco |
1-Aug-04/6:24 AM |
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I rather like it. I like the cadence but the 4th line os s-2 seems just a bit wordy. Excellent stanza though.
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| Re: Barflies and Bombshells by wilco |
1-Aug-04/6:27 AM |
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Even with the title, this works both ways. Ugh! I'm feeling girlish this morning.
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1-Aug-04/6:29 AM |
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sick and funny. i hate that.
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| Re: Peace that Passes Understanding by Dovina |
1-Aug-04/6:38 AM |
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Are you yelling at yourself in your head? This is what confuses/bugs me about this. 8 for now.
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| Re: Mushroom Potion #9 by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
2-Aug-04/5:58 AM |
Did you want this to be just a bit pimply?
Scary,fun.
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| Re: Mr. Stryker, Do You Really Want Some Kind of War? by cat |
3-Aug-04/8:48 AM |
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3-Aug-04/8:49 AM |
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