on some deleted poem
3 Aug 2004, 8:49 AM
how sad
on some deleted poem
3 Aug 2004, 8:57 AM
n/c 10
on Mr. Stryker, Do You Really Want Some Kind of War? by cat
3 Aug 2004, 8:48 AM
You intrigue me, feline. Some help.
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You can afford to trim this, I think
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You can afford to trim this, I think
on some deleted poem
1 Aug 2004, 6:29 AM
sick and funny. i hate that.
on Mushroom Potion #9 by <{Baba^Yaga}>
2 Aug 2004, 5:58 AM
Did you want this to be just a bit pimply?
Scary,fun.
Scary,fun.
on Barflies and Bombshells by wilco
1 Aug 2004, 6:27 AM
Even with the title, this works both ways. Ugh! I'm feeling girlish this morning.
on some deleted poem
1 Aug 2004, 6:19 AM
A lawn tractor by Buick. Hmmm. Is that as silly as pooping a Cornish game hen? You may move on now.
on Peace that Passes Understanding by Dovina
1 Aug 2004, 6:38 AM
Are you yelling at yourself in your head? This is what confuses/bugs me about this. 8 for now.
on The Conception of a Dream by wilco
1 Aug 2004, 6:24 AM
I rather like it. I like the cadence but the 4th line os s-2 seems just a bit wordy. Excellent stanza though.
on Gap-Fold vs. Sour Milk by Venus
28 Jul 2004, 9:08 AM
Yes, I like the reform as well.
on Bon Voyage by Jeremi B. Handrinos
31 Jul 2004, 8:45 AM
Obviously, your best.
on some deleted poem
31 Jul 2004, 8:45 AM
Call me an oddball, I like it as-is.
on some deleted poem
31 Jul 2004, 9:02 AM
My 1.287 cents? I didn't see Mr Moors' film. He's laughing all the way to the bank. did the notes get the job done?
on Untitled. by SupremeDreamer
28 Jul 2004, 9:12 AM
"I could not connect- and be absorbed in a stardust high" excellent line. the rest leaves me...unkempt.
on some deleted poem
28 Jul 2004, 9:14 AM
The black sequined clutch-perhaps.
I don't like the questions. The rest is dandy.
I don't like the questions. The rest is dandy.
on The Annual January Thaw by Dovina
27 Jul 2004, 5:45 PM
Interesting shuffle.
on some deleted poem
27 Jul 2004, 6:21 AM
Absolutely!!!! Sometimes my Legos give me nightmares.
on some deleted poem
27 Jul 2004, 6:30 AM
A little slow off the line but the second stanza just smokes the tires!!! Loved it. I'll read the giant later today. welcome.
on Zin/Enough/Things/Squeeze/Flow by gregsamsa222
27 Jul 2004, 8:42 AM
no big pompous words. cliches, used artfully almost unnoticeable. backwards works.