Re: Cassandra. by SupremeDreamer	3-Aug-04/8:59 AM
I'd like to see the rythm a bit smoother. I like this.
regarding some deleted poem...	5-Aug-04/6:44 AM
feel free to backhand me for being the dim I am. Dic.com says one n for inamorato. 10 for teaching me latin.
regarding some deleted poem...	5-Aug-04/10:22 AM
"Poetry is a search for syllables to shoot at the barriers of the known and the unknowable." Carl Sandburg I like this but it's too thin like weak iced tea.
Re: The huntsman's secret by Stephen Robins	5-Aug-04/11:17 AM
Too bad neither one of us is bad enough to grace the worst list ,eh?
Re: Marina by INTRANSIT	6-Aug-04/8:36 AM
Here. Let me douse this "poem" with the only score that actually befits such a pompous fog.1
Re: Honey by Jeremi B. Handrinos	6-Aug-04/8:41 AM
I don't like *trippy* and the first two lines of the last stanza go pimply try to change the why/fly. The rest, unlike me, is ace.
regarding some deleted poem...	6-Aug-04/12:31 PM
Yet it is not mentioned in the Bible. Hmmm.
regarding some deleted poem...	6-Aug-04/7:08 PM
Tyrranosaurus Rex gobbles a million mex.
Re: Mike Pike!! by DR Limerick	7-Aug-04/6:35 AM
and that's when Tina screamed "IKE!"
Re: Child of my Buttocks by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	7-Aug-04/7:12 AM
"and god goes not at all with wine" ace.
regarding some deleted poem...	17-Aug-04/12:01 PM
Compare this to the one you have on the best list. You used an image there. There are no images here. It's all telling and no showing. Find an image. Stay away from stone and God. Too cliche. Use the brown cloud as a kind of hazy security blanket. Or something else. look around. Possibility is everywhere. Try again, I know you can do this. The next time you make the top, it won't be an accident. Keep reading too. XOI
Re: The Fog And The Androids by Shardik	17-Aug-04/12:04 PM
Narrow space between the fog and the ground. Just right for crawling.
Re: Pomegranate Girl by Caducus	17-Aug-04/12:06 PM
I wish I had more time.
Re: Navy Pier by Doug	17-Aug-04/12:08 PM
concerned. intersting. not sure i like it but it's better than the first time 'round
Re: Pomegranate Girl by Caducus	17-Aug-04/12:10 PM
I think you would do better to lose any rhyme here, even accidental. Good to see ya.
regarding some deleted poem...	17-Aug-04/12:23 PM
I'm changing my name to: Man who speaks like Fire Engine. whaddaya think? i got nuthin.
regarding some deleted poem...	28-Aug-04/10:46 AM
And when it happens in a public facility?
Re: What Has It Gotten Us? by Dovina	29-Aug-04/5:14 AM
look up: more than i bargained for.
Re: Haunted by Bachus	29-Aug-04/5:17 AM
Do you think/feel it is somehow your duty to guide those who follow your work? Picked up O.B. o A. P. Spot on, as usual.
regarding some deleted poem...	29-Aug-04/12:37 PM
Waitresses should come with visometers to tell customers their sizzling fruit platters have been ogled enough to prevent dirty looks.