| Re: butterfly by winniss |
5-Nov-08/1:43 AM |
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| Re: Poetic Blue Justice by Dovina |
5-Nov-08/1:33 AM |
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When I knew that my father was to pass on, I asked him to leave me his handicapped sign in his will.. for situations where you can't find a damn park! I enjoyed this Dovina. Thank you.
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| Re: Mountain Fever by Celticai |
19-Oct-08/12:47 AM |
I'd go with not a good poem personally.
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| Re: Mountain Fever by Celticai |
15-Oct-08/10:32 PM |
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No one has actually commented on the intent of the poem. I've received many talking about the 'nature' of this poem - that it is about landscapes and one-ness with the earth. It was actually about seeking an orgasmic experience.. go figure.
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| Re: Mountain Fever by Celticai |
15-Oct-08/10:30 PM |
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Thank you Nentwined... I suppose the my verbosity overflows into my poetry. I speak very much as I write - just like Regency Ladies - twittering mindlessly, repetitiously covering the same inadequate sayings endeavouring to get my point across. I appreciate all the comments I receive from others on this site.
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| Re: Words by Celticai |
15-Oct-08/10:26 PM |
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I'm glad that people have found this poem difficult to read.. that was the purpose! lol It was supposed to demonstrate a process rather than a product.
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| Re: Opening Your Heart by chesty82 |
15-Oct-08/10:22 PM |
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Knowing a little of the situation that surrounds the writing of this poem, I'm moved greatly by this. Congratulations Chesty - I hope that the person it was intended for has read it!
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| Re: My love by chesty82 |
15-Oct-08/10:21 PM |
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I enjoyed this one! - especially the last verse!
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| Re: Inner Peace by chesty82 |
15-Oct-08/10:20 PM |
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This gives me a sense of your internal struggle, Chesty.
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| Re: Amazing Grace ~ for all bass drummers ;) by Celticai |
6-Oct-08/4:58 PM |
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Thanks.. Although the "Yes, it's better than..." are actually a rhythm that I use to play a calypso beat to Amazing Grace.
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| Re: a comment on Mountain Fever by Celticai |
6-Oct-08/4:57 PM |
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No I'm not. New Age influence definitely as I'm Wiccan.
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| Re: Beauty? by Celticai |
6-Oct-08/1:10 PM |
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I never said that it was fake.. it was more of a comment on the excess and cost and for what end?
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| Re: a comment on Beauty? by Celticai |
2-Oct-08/6:54 AM |
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Thank you Bethy! I appreciate the comments and the understanding. I have been inspired by your writing as well! We have a mutual admiration society.. lol
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| Re: unheeded by Skamper |
1-Oct-08/3:44 PM |
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Made me think of my teenage years and smoking through the bathroom window!
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| Re: Can you beLIEve? by T. Jonathron Remp |
1-Oct-08/3:43 PM |
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A political politiked commentary on today and the presidential campaign... your word choices create an interesting fluidity to the reading.
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| Re: Lover by Bethy |
1-Oct-08/3:40 PM |
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An aching refrain.. Bethy did you mean to use wisp or whispered in the fifth line? Just wondered if the use of present tense was purposeful?
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| Re: Rails to Trails by Dovina |
1-Oct-08/3:38 PM |
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Dovina.. my hubby is a train nut.. I love this! Many of the heritage railways would love a copy of this. Congratulations.. it conveys the melancholy and the hope.
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| Re: a comment on Mountain Fever by Celticai |
29-Sep-08/1:16 PM |
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If it resonated for you and touched your spirit, I am a very happy person! Thank you.
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| Re: Anger by Celticai |
29-Sep-08/1:15 PM |
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Thanks Bethy... this is just one of those poems that gave me an opportunity to express how I was feeling at the time! :)
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| Re: freedom for all by ThePariahDog |
28-Sep-08/5:04 PM |
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your use of similes and metaphors are very poignant!
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