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My love (Other) by chesty82
This box is nice and cosy As i lay aside to earth The pain has gone from me And it no longer hurts I'm surrounded by the beauty Of eternal light and love Caressed by all the warmth And the goodness i have touched My eyes are overwhelmed By the visions that i see Never in my life Could i imagine such beauty My family comes to greet me New friends and faces too My old friends i will greet When their time is due I searched the earth endlessly Never finding what i seeked In heaven i found my love When she held me i just weeped

Up the ladder: Winter comes
Down the ladder: Cold Thunder

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Arithmetic Mean: 9.0
Weighted score: 5.1897035
Overall Rank: 4782
Posted: October 7, 2008 4:33 AM PDT; Last modified: October 7, 2008 4:33 AM PDT
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[9] Celticai @ 123.211.253.133 | 15-Oct-08/10:21 PM | Reply
I enjoyed this one! - especially the last verse!
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