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love letter revisited (Free verse) by Caducus
Her love declaration
now furred by years
typed in sylvaen
your words pashmir.
My Palomino tear marks
from the line that mattered
stale in sentiment
and new lover Gucci.
Pressed upon paper
remnants of lip gloss
fading with alkaline
our film noir kiss in waves
Deborah Kerr is dead
From here, to eternity.
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Arithmetic Mean: 9.0
Weighted score: 5.1897035
Overall Rank: 4771
Posted: November 27, 2008 5:34 AM PST; Last modified: November 27, 2008 5:34 AM PST
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