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love letter revisited (Free verse) by Caducus
Her love declaration now furred by years typed in sylvaen your words pashmir. My Palomino tear marks from the line that mattered stale in sentiment and new lover Gucci. Pressed upon paper remnants of lip gloss fading with alkaline our film noir kiss in waves Deborah Kerr is dead From here, to eternity.

Up the ladder: screener
Down the ladder: kerosene lantern

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Arithmetic Mean: 9.0
Weighted score: 5.1897035
Overall Rank: 4761
Posted: November 27, 2008 5:34 AM PST; Last modified: November 27, 2008 5:34 AM PST
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