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Reason (Free verse) by Dovina birdsong wakes me
singing for the same reason
trucks honk—
to proclaim their territories
or to call a female
some memories fade
some hold
no reason guides them
the passing comment sticks
the fire fades
he swings me
the way the sun
swings the earth
shaping the universe
then left without reason
Up the ladder:
Your not my boyfriend Chuck
Down the ladder:
Him
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Posted: December 29, 2020 2:05 PM PST; Last modified: December 29, 2020 2:05 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.1897035 Overall Rank: 4770 Comments:
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Jill Stockinger @ 127.0.0.1
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1-Jan-21/6:45 PM
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Love the last stanza, the sound matches the actions beautifully
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