| Re: Promises by blueiris1261 |
10-Jul-02/2:52 PM |
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| Re: Z. by ErgoErgun |
10-Jul-02/2:53 PM |
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THE LAST THREE LINES SUCK HARDER THAN THE SUN IN THE SUMMER SKY IS BRIGHT. OTHER THAN THAT THIS POEM IS QUITE QUITE GOOD.
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| Re: pain of love: by Sapphire |
10-Jul-02/2:54 PM |
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The door is open, start walking Ms. Streisand.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
10-Jul-02/2:54 PM |
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| Re: Mrs. Robinson by roses are read |
10-Jul-02/6:42 PM |
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I'd imagine both of those colors are the same pigment: pthalocyanine. Aren't I interesting? Wait wait don't ignore me! Why are you drowning me out?!?
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| Re: Drinking Gravel by unknown |
10-Jul-02/6:43 PM |
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I have three words for you: smoke dope
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| Re: How my head feels by Adriaan |
10-Jul-02/9:17 PM |
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Nobody cares about your brain. I can't relate to this feeling personally. Thus, shit.
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| Re: Quiet by kissmeufool58 |
10-Jul-02/9:18 PM |
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People from other cities used to drive for miles just for a taste of our ATL style
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| Re: Angelic Triumvirate by Sterling5583 |
10-Jul-02/9:20 PM |
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This is so self-centered it bothers me. It actually seems quite sincere. So it's really good in that sense. I can't fault the preachyness, as much as I'd like to. Although I didn't enjoy this poem, it's pretty good.
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| Re: KAT 2 by nentwined |
10-Jul-02/9:23 PM |
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The irony of this poem is the graphic rigidity of its format. Perhaps you can look into that quality of the poem - the idea that the poetry is in itself a restriction from which you are unable, as a poet, to be free from. And I think the selective capitalization is really a small fish to be frying, I'd focus on the big idea a bit more.
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| Re: AIDS in a Glass by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
10-Jul-02/9:30 PM |
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Dude you see Crank Yankers last night? I'm not surprised.
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| Re: life by -=??lilaznjen??=- |
16-Jul-02/9:59 PM |
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Are you anusless or something?
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| Re: Dragon's Dream by HolyKnightOfFaith |
16-Jul-02/10:10 PM |
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Good god you know they don't exist right?? 7 for having the decency to not call it a haiku.
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16-Jul-02/10:11 PM |
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| Re: Wither by agent008 |
16-Jul-02/10:12 PM |
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008 was an asshole. He doublecrossed 007.
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| Re: Untitled by midnight |
16-Jul-02/10:13 PM |
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This is as didactic as I.
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| Re: Roundabout by nentwined |
16-Jul-02/10:14 PM |
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Does your log coordinate IPs/traceroute info with ranking information?
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| Re: PURPLE COWS by GAC |
16-Jul-02/10:17 PM |
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LET'S ALL BE BIG CRAZY GAYWADS IN LOVE TOGETHER AND MEET IN THE BAY AREA SOMETIME ONLY TO DISCOVER PURPLE COWS DON'T EXIST AND THAT YOU DON'T LOOK ANYTHING LIKE JEAN LUC PICARD ON ST:TNG!!!
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| Re: Ifni's birthday by Cha no Onna |
16-Jul-02/10:18 PM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
16-Jul-02/10:20 PM |
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You don't so much toss paint as you slap it on. You toss salads though.
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