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Free verse № 2261

Drinking Gravel

Member since 2002 · Posted 20 May 2002 · 4 comments

We drank gravel, Or at least, I tried. The stones flow easier, they say, When the tide's high. The tide was high, And the sun was outside, Just burning down the sky, But inside, behind this burning sky, In this high tide, I drank gravel. Or I tried. She smiled, and I tried smiling, But from all the stones in my stomach, churning, I coughed, throat burning, From gravel, and learning That I cannot be as high As the tide.

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4 comments

[4] nentwined 12-Jun-02/2:07 AM Reply
I have to give this one a definite thumbs "huh?".
[6] -=SeTTle=- 10-Jul-02/6:43 PM Reply
I have three words for you: smoke dope
[8] deleted user 23-Aug-02/8:18 AM Reply
this is odd, and i think i like it. hmmm...
[8] <~> 23-Aug-02/8:24 AM Reply
this made me smile.