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you soften me (Free verse) by silvertongueddevil
you soften me
like butter
and i've been spreading stones
on dry bread,
and i've been heavy
a sack of river stones
all a long time wearing
their rough edges down
leaving sand in my cough
and gravel in my words
since cock learned to crow
and crow learned to fly
and fly learned to hum
now the ground won't hold me
still the sky won't have me
but the waters,
at last the waters
will float me
now i don't feel like a rock
to their cold hands
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.230769
Weighted score: 5.168706
Overall Rank: 4962
Posted: May 11, 2002 3:27 AM PDT; Last modified: May 11, 2002 3:27 AM PDT
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