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Dragon's Dream (Free verse) by HolyKnightOfFaith Fly with grace great one,
May your soul rest peacefully.
Sleep well your highness.
Up the ladder:
Summer Day
Down the ladder:
Car Crashes
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 2.8181818
Posted: June 2, 2002 8:45 PM PDT; Last modified: June 9, 2002 1:47 AM PDTWeighted score: 3.909091 Overall Rank: 13424 Comments:
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nentwined @ 66.92.183.34
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7-Jun-02/11:53 PM
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one syllable shy of a haiku?
raymond e feist sucks dick. david gemmell is at least twelve times better.
feist does not suck, i think you dont know a good author or book when you see it. I think you suck
I read two of Feist's books. They were as bad as your poetry.
I don't think that your writing is too hot either
you know what, fuck off alright. Your poetry is shit and you cannot appreciate good writing.
Wow, good point. Now that the Holy Knight of Faith has denounced my viewpoint, I've realised how wrong I was.
Good god you know they don't exist right?? 7 for having the decency to not call it a haiku.
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