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Summer Day (Lyric) by Tekara Bright the day, in sun-drenched splendor.
Whispering winds with clouds, confer.
Asleep in the sidewalk, the neighborhood cat,
Then gone in an instant... just like that!
Perfect days we hold so near,
Why can't there be more throughout the year?
Up the ladder:
winter
Down the ladder:
Dragon's Dream
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 3.764706
Posted: May 21, 2002 11:39 AM PDT; Last modified: May 21, 2002 11:39 AM PDTWeighted score: 3.9119565 Overall Rank: 13428 Comments:
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pitchblackdisaster @ 195.92.194.16
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16-Aug-02/10:43 AM
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nice one i like that poem its very good and happy!!!!!!
hmm, too plain for my taste, sure i can picture myself in the scene but do i really want to be there? a cat? bright day? cloudy? sidewalk? id rather be surfing
cannot undertsand why u got the 1's and 0's... i like this one
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