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Summer Day (Lyric) by Tekara

Bright the day, in sun-drenched splendor. Whispering winds with clouds, confer. Asleep in the sidewalk, the neighborhood cat, Then gone in an instant... just like that! Perfect days we hold so near, Why can't there be more throughout the year?

Dark Angle 11-Sep-02/12:31 AM
hmm, too plain for my taste, sure i can picture myself in the scene but do i really want to be there? a cat? bright day? cloudy? sidewalk? id rather be surfing




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