on Chuds in the mall by razorgrin
6 Jul 2002, 11:25 AM
BHUBUBUHLLRGRLRBRLRB I MIXED VIAGRA AND OLEAN
on some deleted poem
2 Jul 2002, 12:55 PM
TIGHTEN THIS
on Transient world by daryash-koh
10 Jul 2002, 2:36 PM
I think there is enough of this sort of poetry here already.
on some deleted poem
10 Jul 2002, 2:38 PM
good god a good poem, god
on mental collides by nentwined
10 Jul 2002, 2:51 PM
Wow looks like I've influenced you quite a bit. Good work. This poem is great, I liked it a lot. It demonstrates and illustrates a feeling which can't be demonstrated directly, the sort of hazyness that is paired with thoughts of this nature. I would like it if it was a bit clearer - the "not yet" carries some weight but not quite enough. On the other had, the "not yet" is good since it doesn't bring any other entities into play, it simply marks one's place in time. I'd have investigated something more externally verbal, like "wait for it", that is, if I wrote this sort of poetry.
on Farewell Song by jaalko
10 Jul 2002, 2:41 PM
*slobbering noises for six hourse in the room nextdoor while you try to sleep*
on Conversation Unspoken by JuddNelson
10 Jul 2002, 2:42 PM
Wait wait wait here's my immitation of Martin Lawrence: "It is clear you have *women problems*"
on Holly by wlshepherd
10 Jul 2002, 2:43 PM
Good work LET'S PARTY
on some deleted poem
10 Jul 2002, 2:43 PM
Please Don't Write Me Anymore
on a prayer for grief by mitchski
10 Jul 2002, 2:44 PM
How come you never write poetry about being in love and getting laid?
on Summertime by KatieKaBoom
10 Jul 2002, 2:45 PM
good point, somewhat unique good job etc.
on some deleted poem
6 Jul 2002, 11:25 AM
TOUCH THEM HARDER......TOO HARD
on Hair today by Pieforce
6 Jul 2002, 4:58 PM
but she used to be my-eye-eye-eye-ine
on Unfortunate Semen Incident by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
6 Jul 2002, 11:24 AM
VERY CLEVER. ANYWAY I WAS LIKE DO YOU REALLY THINK A GIRL WHO EATS KIMCHEE THREE TIMES A DAY MINDS THE TASTE OF THAT STUFF I THINK NOT. THis is, by the way, one of the funniest limericks I've ever seen.
on some deleted poem
30 Jun 2002, 6:30 PM
Couldn't find anything that rhymed with Chode Island I see. Furthermore, I have lots of gay friends, so you can't accuse me of being bigotted.
on Ethnic Smells by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
30 Jun 2002, 6:41 PM
The polacks, kikes, carpet sellers, shovelheads, bohunks, porch monkeys, mics, pakies, ricans, wetbacks, frostbacks, wops, wogs, frogs, ruskies, zipperheads and krauts smell fine to me. It's the women I don't like.
on some deleted poem
2 Jul 2002, 11:46 AM
I agree that beakism should be a band on the grounds that it is an original name and we need more original bands. Also, please give me some advice: is it reacharound or reach-around?
on some deleted poem
28 May 2002, 1:38 PM
Wow that really hurt DA. You are truly, profoundly retarded.
on some deleted poem
27 May 2002, 8:53 PM
Specificity young poet! Specificity!! Other than that I liked it. And sorry about DA, he loves feces. Specifically, lots of feces.
on The masquerade by vamos_tuzos
6 Jul 2002, 11:26 AM
BRIAN ENO