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27-May-02/8:53 PM |
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Specificity young poet! Specificity!! Other than that I liked it. And sorry about DA, he loves feces. Specifically, lots of feces.
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28-May-02/1:38 PM |
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Wow that really hurt DA. You are truly, profoundly retarded.
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30-Jun-02/6:30 PM |
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Couldn't find anything that rhymed with Chode Island I see. Furthermore, I have lots of gay friends, so you can't accuse me of being bigotted.
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| Re: Ethnic Smells by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
30-Jun-02/6:41 PM |
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The polacks, kikes, carpet sellers, shovelheads, bohunks, porch monkeys, mics, pakies, ricans, wetbacks, frostbacks, wops, wogs, frogs, ruskies, zipperheads and krauts smell fine to me. It's the women I don't like.
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2-Jul-02/11:46 AM |
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I agree that beakism should be a band on the grounds that it is an original name and we need more original bands. Also, please give me some advice: is it reacharound or reach-around?
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2-Jul-02/12:55 PM |
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| Re: Unfortunate Semen Incident by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
6-Jul-02/11:24 AM |
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VERY CLEVER. ANYWAY I WAS LIKE DO YOU REALLY THINK A GIRL WHO EATS KIMCHEE THREE TIMES A DAY MINDS THE TASTE OF THAT STUFF I THINK NOT. THis is, by the way, one of the funniest limericks I've ever seen.
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| Re: Chuds in the mall by razorgrin |
6-Jul-02/11:25 AM |
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BHUBUBUHLLRGRLRBRLRB I MIXED VIAGRA AND OLEAN
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6-Jul-02/11:25 AM |
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TOUCH THEM HARDER......TOO HARD
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| Re: The masquerade by vamos_tuzos |
6-Jul-02/11:26 AM |
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| Re: Hair today by Pieforce |
6-Jul-02/4:58 PM |
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but she used to be my-eye-eye-eye-ine
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| Re: Transient world by daryash-koh |
10-Jul-02/2:36 PM |
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I think there is enough of this sort of poetry here already.
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10-Jul-02/2:38 PM |
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good god a good poem, god
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| Re: Farewell Song by jaalko |
10-Jul-02/2:41 PM |
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*slobbering noises for six hourse in the room nextdoor while you try to sleep*
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| Re: Conversation Unspoken by JuddNelson |
10-Jul-02/2:42 PM |
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Wait wait wait here's my immitation of Martin Lawrence: "It is clear you have *women problems*"
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| Re: Holly by wlshepherd |
10-Jul-02/2:43 PM |
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10-Jul-02/2:43 PM |
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Please Don't Write Me Anymore
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| Re: a prayer for grief by mitchski |
10-Jul-02/2:44 PM |
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How come you never write poetry about being in love and getting laid?
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| Re: Summertime by KatieKaBoom |
10-Jul-02/2:45 PM |
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good point, somewhat unique good job etc.
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| Re: mental collides by nentwined |
10-Jul-02/2:51 PM |
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Wow looks like I've influenced you quite a bit. Good work. This poem is great, I liked it a lot. It demonstrates and illustrates a feeling which can't be demonstrated directly, the sort of hazyness that is paired with thoughts of this nature. I would like it if it was a bit clearer - the "not yet" carries some weight but not quite enough. On the other had, the "not yet" is good since it doesn't bring any other entities into play, it simply marks one's place in time. I'd have investigated something more externally verbal, like "wait for it", that is, if I wrote this sort of poetry.
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