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Transient world

Member since 2002 · Posted 10 May 2002 · 4 comments

Time will pass, And life will pass, The turning of the earth will pass, The burning of the stars will pass, So in this transient world, alas, I will pass gas.

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[5] nentwined 10-May-02/9:18 AM Reply

hmm. I actually like the rhythm building up, but only as taken seriosly; the last line, while ostensibly an amusing twist, doesn't really do it for me.

Maybe if you kept running with the humor and tied it into the poem more?

[4] anonymous 19-May-02/12:15 AM Reply

pointless, slight smile

[5] -=SeTTle=- 10-Jul-02/2:36 PM Reply

I think there is enough of this sort of poetry here already.

[5] Blake 17-Aug-02/1:12 PM Reply

Lewis Caroll, meet Tom Green.