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Free verse № 3819

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Member since 2002 · Posted 10 Jul 2002 · 4 comments

evil bestows upon evil good seeks good people combine to balance the ways of the world as they decide who to be they look around with wonderment as things are and become what they want it to be knowing what life has for you and not being able to have that happiness everyone wants and needs to survive in this life it makes no sense when people act like something they're not pretending to feel to succumb to society and their surroundings

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4 comments

[4] -=SeTTle=- 16-Jul-02/10:13 PM Reply
This is as didactic as I.
[0] poetandknowit 15-Aug-02/2:38 PM Reply
Didn't I already say I didn't like this once. Do I have to vote on the poem for it to stop popping up in the random file? I know there are tons of poems on this site.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 15-Aug-02/2:39 PM Reply
We can never be rid of the ghosts who haunt us. Not on poemranker anyway.
[0] poetandknowit 15-Aug-02/2:56 PM Reply
I see you again dear poem, and still I cannot succumb to even pretending to feel the happiness everyone wants in being able to write anything more than rubbish. There, I voted, now please go away.