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apathy (Free verse) by lexicon Born too Late
Born too Late
Can't catch up
Behind my time.
Concerned.
Actively voicing my opinions,
Shamed at public apathy.
Free love
Free love
Why not love?
Contempt for authority
I try to fight it
And often lose.
Beaten back, I try again.
Up the ladder:
the child that never was
Down the ladder:
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Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 4.2
Posted: May 10, 2002 4:16 PM PDT; Last modified: May 10, 2002 4:16 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.2953625 Overall Rank: 13136 Comments:
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anonymous @
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10-May-02/5:16 PM
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why can't you choose zero? this might be better with some really loud guitars.
DOW NOW NOW NOW (Guitar music, girls)
maybe you should look up the meaning of apathy.
I find the repetition interesting, but things like "Free love" and "contempt for authority" are cliche.
Certainly agree with the sentiment!
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