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apathy (Free verse) by lexicon

Born too Late Born too Late Can't catch up Behind my time. Concerned. Actively voicing my opinions, Shamed at public apathy. Free love Free love Why not love? Contempt for authority I try to fight it And often lose. Beaten back, I try again.

markb 11-Jul-02/10:13 PM
I find the repetition interesting, but things like "Free love" and "contempt for authority" are cliche.




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