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Quiet (Free verse) by kissmeufool58
Quiet I remain, forever unspoken
I'm chilled by confusion, frozen with fear
Awaiting the sun at it's horizon
Secretly hoping for the storm to clear
Many stars have fadded, the moon is dim
I gently shiver, guidance I have none
To drown all my sorrow I think of him
The cold mist brings gray skies still no sun
Piece by Piece most of my dreams now scattered
Everything happened which I was scared of
No longer my soul as free as a bird
Longing for the heavens to send a dove
Trembling inside and out, crushed is my heart
Bullseye, where you did hit me with the dart
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7522
Posted: July 10, 2002 8:28 PM PDT; Last modified: July 10, 2002 8:28 PM PDT
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