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Quiet (Free verse) by kissmeufool58
Quiet I remain, forever unspoken I'm chilled by confusion, frozen with fear Awaiting the sun at it's horizon Secretly hoping for the storm to clear Many stars have fadded, the moon is dim I gently shiver, guidance I have none To drown all my sorrow I think of him The cold mist brings gray skies still no sun Piece by Piece most of my dreams now scattered Everything happened which I was scared of No longer my soul as free as a bird Longing for the heavens to send a dove Trembling inside and out, crushed is my heart Bullseye, where you did hit me with the dart

Up the ladder: Bloody Night
Down the ladder: Flies

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7522
Posted: July 10, 2002 8:28 PM PDT; Last modified: July 10, 2002 8:28 PM PDT
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[5] -=SeTTle=- @ 63.214.97.114 | 10-Jul-02/9:18 PM | Reply
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