poemranker ::Quiet by kissmeufool58

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Free verse № 3950

Quiet

Member since 2002 · Posted 10 Jul 2002 · 1 comment

Quiet I remain, forever unspoken I'm chilled by confusion, frozen with fear Awaiting the sun at it's horizon Secretly hoping for the storm to clear Many stars have fadded, the moon is dim I gently shiver, guidance I have none To drown all my sorrow I think of him The cold mist brings gray skies still no sun Piece by Piece most of my dreams now scattered Everything happened which I was scared of No longer my soul as free as a bird Longing for the heavens to send a dove Trembling inside and out, crushed is my heart Bullseye, where you did hit me with the dart

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[5] -=SeTTle=- 10-Jul-02/9:18 PM Reply
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