Re: Belle Melange/The Curse of Millhaven by lmp	9-Jun-12/4:50 AM
excuse my ignorance....but isn't this already a poem/ballad? as you say by nick cave? If that's the case then what it this?
Re: Max's Poems by nentwined	9-Jun-12/4:46 AM
wtf....moronic
Re: Self-Inflicted Wounds by wilco	18-Feb-11/3:13 PM
at least your just rusty, I, on the other hand am flabby...takes a bit of getting back into it huh?
Re: Mornings by alvinb	18-Feb-11/3:09 PM
oh dear...what do you think is for you proper? Sounds like you think you deserve something better, we have only what we create and if your creation is words, make them come alive.
Re: Late Song by nypoet22	18-Feb-11/2:57 PM
Whenever I pine for you to be mine I remember what my father used to say You can have anything you want but you cant have everything you want at the same time If this is what you want you can't have me there's probably one too many wants...if this is what you need you can't have me and pine, really?
Re: tree in a flood by Skamper	18-Feb-11/2:51 PM
too quick and too flabby, hmmm something to ponder over. Thanks guys
Re: sperladnik: the sequel by malpaso	6-Jul-08/4:50 AM
made me giggle a little awkwardly, not quite getting the hang of it ;)
Re: A rock by nisim2	6-Jul-08/4:47 AM
quite riddling - I want to find the trick inside the writing and answer it.
Re: in this bus terminal of the future by nentwined	6-Jul-08/4:44 AM
I like that..change without true progress... the word inevitable jars a little with me, not sure why
Re: a comment on Daddy works at the Bank by Skamper	6-Jul-08/4:24 AM
yeah...I feel the same..thx
Re: a comment on I Got Mine Designed by Skamper	6-Jul-08/4:23 AM
no, not attacking the frost at all...just puting some emphasis on the process of defrosting, and no matter what the item is it's never the same as the original. It always loses something, and I wonder what we lose when tinkering with life.
Re: a comment on I Got Mine Designed by Skamper	6-Jul-08/4:20 AM
some thoughts about artificial insemination, a bit of a follow on from Daddy works at the bank. As for the hint/smell of porpoise, do you live by the sea?
Re: who wansa do that? by malpaso	28-Dec-07/11:44 PM
As much as I enjoy the short poem, due to lack of true inteligence...I can't seem to get a handle on this one. There's no oomph or moment of clarity, or nod, or small smile, or any of the things that brings instant understanding of what your saying, that should come with shorter writes. "You wanna go do somethin'?" sighs "Nah" - boredom, apathy...a statement, but is it poetry? hmmm?
Re: a comment on A-looky here. by malpaso	28-Dec-07/11:37 PM
oh duh! Of course it does...I can be dense...and I knew I had commented on this one, but it seems to have disappeared.
Re: a comment on Shiver by Skamper	28-Dec-07/11:34 PM
swapping to competing existances reads to me like a race, rather than a statement of how it is. fingers driven explains the fingers are being driven by something without his control whereas driven fingers, to me, seems to imply he has control. hyphen dropped as well as line 14... 13 stays, I like it. :) Thanks for the input - well appreciated as always.
Re: a comment on Shiver by Skamper	28-Dec-07/11:25 PM
I wanted to be spare - create the energy of serial killing, the need and driving ambition of it, as coldly as possible. The line is 'creating monuments' not moments.
Re: a comment on disregard by Skamper	18-Dec-07/10:43 PM
hmmm....I wonder about this one myself! It's an old one that i went back to, should have left it alone...
Re: Easter Egg Hunt by Dovina	29-Nov-07/3:32 AM
I wish I could understand this, but the language is out of my reach. :(
Re: a comment on Missing - You by Skamper	29-Nov-07/3:20 AM
Iv'e been messing about with this one Dovina, to get the last stanza working as I see it, to no avail. I might leave it for a bit and see if anything shows up later. The rain/sane has bearing though - we are both a little unstable and we met in the rain...ah! so romantic, a couple of soggy fruit loops :)
Re: a comment on Missing - You by Skamper	29-Nov-07/3:15 AM
I know it's such an overused phrase - too easy yeah?