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I Got Mine Designed (Free verse) by Skamper
snap frozen delicacies scrummy yummy nuked to perfection intelligent injections minor defections dented fenders force fed bred open legs future dreamings eyes closed impregnating hose blows bright lights and shiny things glitter and glowing growing fresh is life’s zest de-frost second best it just never tastes quite the same Funny that...

Up the ladder: After Rain
Down the ladder: Control

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.8
Weighted score: 5.2145653
Overall Rank: 4409
Posted: June 22, 2008 6:05 AM PDT; Last modified: June 22, 2008 6:05 AM PDT
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[3] nentwined @ 98.148.150.246 | 26-Jun-08/8:27 PM | Reply
funny that. random with a hint of purpose (I smell porpoise). I'd like to know a little more about what you got designed... maybe. :)

I'm possibly missing a lot, here.
[n/a] Skamper @ 123.208.35.171 > nentwined | 6-Jul-08/4:20 AM | Reply
some thoughts about artificial insemination, a bit of a follow on from Daddy works at the bank. As for the hint/smell of porpoise, do you live by the sea?
[7] Dovina @ 208.127.216.214 | 27-Jun-08/10:46 AM | Reply
At least you're back and ranting erotically. I wish more were. "de-frost" is like putting Frost down. Hopefully you don't mean to; why not "defrost"?
[n/a] Skamper @ 123.208.90.117 > Dovina | 6-Jul-08/4:23 AM | Reply
no, not attacking the frost at all...just puting some emphasis on the process of defrosting, and no matter what the item is it's never the same as the original. It always loses something, and I wonder what we lose when tinkering with life.
[7] SupremeDreamer @ 68.123.141.188 | 9-Jul-08/10:58 PM | Reply
Sexual yearning and defrosted penis frozen in mastubatory rigor mortis... But people hate to much. Really. Simplistic expression is cool.. but sometimes the reader is left wanting more.

Blessed with a seven.
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