poemranker ::I Got Mine Designed by Skamper

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I Got Mine Designed

Member since 2007 · Posted 22 Jun 2008 · 5 comments

snap frozen delicacies scrummy yummy nuked to perfection intelligent injections minor defections dented fenders force fed bred open legs future dreamings eyes closed impregnating hose blows bright lights and shiny things glitter and glowing growing fresh is life’s zest de-frost second best it just never tastes quite the same Funny that...

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[3] nentwined 26-Jun-08/8:27 PM Reply
funny that. random with a hint of purpose (I smell porpoise). I'd like to know a little more about what you got designed... maybe. :)

I'm possibly missing a lot, here.
[n/a] Skamper › nentwined 6-Jul-08/4:20 AM Reply
some thoughts about artificial insemination, a bit of a follow on from Daddy works at the bank. As for the hint/smell of porpoise, do you live by the sea?
[7] Dovina 27-Jun-08/10:46 AM Reply
At least you're back and ranting erotically. I wish more were. "de-frost" is like putting Frost down. Hopefully you don't mean to; why not "defrost"?
[n/a] Skamper › Dovina 6-Jul-08/4:23 AM Reply
no, not attacking the frost at all...just puting some emphasis on the process of defrosting, and no matter what the item is it's never the same as the original. It always loses something, and I wonder what we lose when tinkering with life.
[7] SupremeDreamer 9-Jul-08/10:58 PM Reply
Sexual yearning and defrosted penis frozen in mastubatory rigor mortis... But people hate to much. Really. Simplistic expression is cool.. but sometimes the reader is left wanting more.

Blessed with a seven.