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You're Good (Free verse) by Freethinker1602
Even though you're my ruin I'd never give up a moment you held me I'd never take back a single kiss Never regret a single moment I was with you Don't think I could ever hate you It feels good to love you I'm not interested in forever But the times we were ungaurded The times where we kissed The times we talked and kept close The times where we lay together You are so much more than I thought you could be It's no longer just a lust, it grew deeper It came abruptly with no warning I don't mind because you feel that good In the mornings I remember my love for you And from my mouth your name is the first word I breathe jg

Up the ladder: In Ethel’s Honor
Down the ladder: My

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.8
Weighted score: 5.2145653
Overall Rank: 4406
Posted: November 19, 2003 7:20 PM PST; Last modified: November 19, 2003 7:20 PM PST
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[10] The_Third_Isis @ 24.126.116.54 | 19-Nov-03/10:42 PM | Reply
Lucy dahlin you are scaring me..did you put a nany camm behind the book of shadows you devil you! every breath i take every move i make you been watching me.o.k. shoo now get thee behind me.. opps on the second tought. Fabuloso y romantico bravo!!!
[10] savagelymakeitcount @ 220.99.224.11 | 20-Nov-03/4:41 AM | Reply
Stalker?
[7] Shardik @ 24.126.116.54 | 20-Nov-03/7:58 PM | Reply
unguarded.
[n/a] Freethinker1602 @ 68.48.30.210 | 8-Jan-04/6:34 PM | Reply
wow this is an oldie... well compared to how I feel now and that I understand what it is... it's just a deep appreciation.
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